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Avaria, Rouge Demon

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now i know this is kind of a repost, but i had a new picture for the card and i couldent find the original post so i just desided to recreate it. this is probably the only time i actually want you to tell me what you think of the picture. before you get started though i know it suks, and it was colored by hand so please you know gimme a bit of a break because i know its not a great picture but hey im trying to ilistrate my own cards, not to many people on this forum can state that.

 

im pretty sure the effect is all togeather if you see anything wrong im more then willing to edit it.

 

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you know the best part about this though? I DO OWN THIS PICTURE! i dont have to give a link to the owner because the owner IS ME! lol sorry couldent help myself

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[align=left]"This card cannot be tributed" Do you mean "This card cannot be Summoned except by its own effect". When this card is sent not snet. Pay 500 points to Summon it on the Field, Face up or what.

Hope I helped.[/align]

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[justify]Well he should be proud because he did it by himself. We should tell him to draw more to be better maybe he will be better.[/justify]Well he should be proud because he did it by himself. We should tell him to draw more to be better maybe he will be better.

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[justify]Well he should be proud because he did it by himself. We should tell him to draw more to be better maybe he will be better.[/justify]Well he should be proud because he did it by himself. We should tell him to draw more to be better maybe he will be better.

Or we could tell him to use deviantART
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ugh great, stupid thing, every time, SNET HOW COULD I POST SNET!!! then again tis not the first time: i posted a sea serpent spelled serpint. btw i know it suks, but then again as i said im probably one of the only people on this site who can actually say that I drew my own picture. and about deviantart, im a few steps ahead of you on that one. BUT thats besides the point....

 

"This card cannot be tributed" Do you mean "This card cannot be Summoned except by its own effect". When this card is sent not snet. Pay 500 points to Summon it on the Field, Face up or what.

Hope I helped.

 

no no its supposed to be it cannot be tributed as in cannot be used for a tribute summon except its own effect, if it was the way you say it, it would be an infanent tribute summon, that would be like four monarcs hitting the feild for 2000 life points. though true for up to 2500 life points its a raigeki, but i dont know how to make it a once per tern effect when it leaves play. you mean special summon correct? i will get to correcting it asap but i dont know if im going to post it today so yeah <,<

 

Hmmm,

pic sucks(no offense) and Crimson corrected the error.

 

none taken, no skin off my nose. its original artwork most artwork on this site is well, artwork made by people who do it for a living. though it would be better to explain your statement making it constructive critisism instead of an insult, BUT it dosent matter to me.

 

As you said, Pic = LARGE Fail

 

see above paragraph for your reply

 

Well he should be proud because he did it by himself. We should tell him to draw more to be better maybe he will be better.

 

thank you <,<

 

Or we could tell him to use deviantART

 

already do

 

correction

both are good

god use proper grammar!

 

anywhooo...

card eh pic....ehhhh

4/10

 

sorry for my mental dysabilities cant always help it <,<

 

Yeah and photobucket is good sometimes too.

 

suprisingly i use that as well, but that was for img tags for the cards i made <,<

 

(excuse my spelling i seem to be having a real off day today...)

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Wow, i like that card ALOT cuz as long as you have lifepoints to spare you can keep killing your opponents monsters; which helps me a ton (I use a beatstick/lifepoint regen. deck)

and the effect is original.

9.8/10 (cuz i still like really good pics) but better than i could do if i were to draw it.

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Wow, i like that card ALOT cuz as long as you have lifepoints to spare you can keep killing your opponents monsters; which helps me a ton (I use a beatstick/lifepoint regen. deck)

and the effect is original.

9.8/10 (cuz i still like really good pics) but better than i could do if i were to draw it.

 

thank you very much

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Well Crab you understood the concept but the problem is that this card is confusing as you said he must summon..............ETC. But good job, in the end you came up with a bright idea.

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just a suggestion...... change the pix to save the criticizism..

 

well i can handdle criticism, but whats being said in this thread is not crticism, its insults. criticism would tell me why its bad, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would tell me what i could do to improve it (and no "Learn to draw" is not constructive criticism). but stating "bad pic" or whatever else is neither its insults they may not be INTENDED as insults, but they are insults none the less. in addition i cannot change the pic because this is the best picture of this charicter in existence, im not going to replace this picture with a picture of a random demon when that random demon is not Avaria. its stupid.

 

SO in retrospect if you can only think of an insult to say about the picture KEEP IT TO YOUR SELF. im fine with being told the picture is not up to par, but a constant streem of insults are not going to help me in any way. in fact they are only going to hurt me. so THANK YOU for insulting my picture so often, im not angry just please keep in mind the difference between "criticism" and "insults"

 

At first I thought it was overpowered, but then I realized that he can't Special Summon himself after tributing himself for his effect, as he misses the timing. Seems balanced.

 

ugh stupid timing. not the first time that came up to bite me in the... well you get the picture.

 

ok so the original concept is overpowered..... so what should i do, i would like to keep a removal ability (that dosent stop him from reviving himself) but if its to much then i could just get rid of it, do you think that would be a good idea? in addition if he could be used for a tribute in a tribute summon would he miss his timeing. i mean he cant have the whole tribute thing he needs to not be able to be tributed because of shadow preistest of ohm. it would be an otk with two cards. thats one of the reasons i said "cannot be tributed" and not "cannot be used in a tribute summon" then again if i get rid of the removal ability, or modify it i could make his effect go back to the whole "destroyed" and then it might be a little more ballenced... any suggestions?

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