Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 It's not so much spelling as capitalization and comma usage. You forgot a lot of spaces, and your tenses are mixed up, making it hard to read. Besides that, the capitalization is sub-par. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted May 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 Nearly there, but you must have PERFECT spelling and grammar. Congrats on following the application form, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 i edited my app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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