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Alright first of all you need to put some ATK and DEF points, since it's a monster card. Also I'm not really impressed by the picture and the card name and I'm sure that you can come up with something more creative. You should moreover use IMG tags and try to avoid making too many OCG errors the next time.

Well I can't give you more than 4/10 for this card, even though you're a beginner.

Your next try will probably be better, though, if you follow these advices.

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Please no attachments it's against the rules. This thread should be locked no one should sends comments until a Moderator comes along and locks it. Anyone who sends will end up with a report and a Negative. PS where's the Artist credit.

Hope I helped.

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