Organics Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 FINAL VERSIONFINAL VERSION 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned, select up to 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field and send them to the bottom of your opponent's deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monsters from their Graveyard. Monsters summoned by this effect cannot have their summoning negated. And Her Tuner Monster.Artwork Here: http://photobucket.com/image/anime%20warriors/Unaru_Okami/Anime%20Witches%20and%20Warriors/2007-07-19-63911.jpg?o=253 If this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a WIND monster, you can destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card. If the destroyed card was a Trap Card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Ty for the help. 1st Version 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned, select up to 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field and send them to the bottom of his/her deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monsters from his/her Graveyard. Art found here:http://photobucket.com/image/anime%20warriors/Unaru_Okami/Anime%20Witches%20and%20Warriors/2008-01-10-84784.jpg?o=134 What do you think? 2nd Version 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned, select up to 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field and send them to the bottom of his/her deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monsters from his/her Graveyard. This card's effect cannot be negated by the effect of a Continuous Trap card. The last part of her effect needs OCG work T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Pretty good, I've never tried a synchro, I haven't made any cards forever. Good first try! :D 6-7/10 Keep working on your cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Pretty good' date=' I've never tried a synchro, I haven't made any cards forever. Good first try! :D 6-7/10 Keep working on your cards![/quote'] I was just thinking how overpowered this thing actually is.. *points to Royal Oppression* >_< i'll have to fix that somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 I's actually pretty well balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 It is well balanced, unless, as she said, you had Royal Oppression. Nice to see you're back into card making Organics. The picture is nice and the card, a good effect except for a tiny problem which you brought to the light all on your own. Unfortunately, that was what I was going to suggest to change so forgive me if I sound a bit "cliche" but, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 It is well balanced' date=' unless, as she said, you had Royal Oppression. Nice to see you're back into card making Organics. The picture is nice and the card, a good effect except for a tiny problem which you brought to the light all on your own. Unfortunately, that was what I was going to suggest to change so forgive me if I sound a bit "cliche" but, well done[/i']. I posted a fixed version, the only problem it'll have now is my neglect for other continuous traps o.O OCG help for the last part would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 yeah I agree with Organization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Correct OCG:1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned, select up to 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field and send them to the bottom of your opponent's deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monsters from their Graveyard. Monsters summoned by this effect cannot have their summoning negated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Correct OCG:1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)When this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' select up to 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field and send them to the bottom of your opponent's deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monsters from their Graveyard. Monsters summoned by this effect cannot have their summoning negated.[/i'] XD ty. I'll fix that now.. i actually saved this card.I'll also add a Tuner monster shortly.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 not bad: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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