Conman-Sama Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Pic Credit: http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/338/tokikotsumuraxv8.pngShinobi of the embers was my last card i got some good comments but i remade shinobi of the embers and changed the effect so i made this card to replace the old card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 OCG ERRORSWhen this card is attacked by another Light monster, pay 500 Life Points to decrease the attacking monster's ATK by half.Hope I Helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 OCG ERRORSWhen this card is attacked by another Light monster' date=' pay 500 Life Points to decrease the attacking monster's ATK by half.[/quote'] could also use a better pic - the current one has no background. and remove the quotations from the card name. other than that, its okay. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conman-Sama Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 thanks guys here is the final result Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 better. still, meh 5.5676678456/10 =b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 backgrounds are needed my ocg error friend:First card=5/10Second card=7/10 WORD of advice-all pics need backgrounds my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 OCG ERRORSWhen this card is attacked by another Light monster' date=' pay 500 Life Points to decrease the attacking monster's ATK by half.Hope I Helped.[/quote'] Well it was a good correction but not completely whole.Correct OCG:When this card is attacked by a LIGHT monster, you may pay 500 Life Points to half the attacking monster's ATK. An attribute is always in all Caps. Just a few errors. To the card. It is a bit bland actually and not very playable. White backgrounds really don't work well on cards so I suggest a more fitting background. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 thanks guys here is the final result does this mean you have to pay the lp or is it optional....... if its optional, you should put "you can". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Well it was a good correction but not completely whole.Correct OCG:When this card is attacked by a LIGHT monster' date=' you may pay 500 Life Points to half the attacking monster's ATK.[/color'] "...until the End Phase of the turn." or "...during Damage Calculation only." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 "...until the End Phase of the turn." or "...during Damage Calculation only." I did not include such because it was not listed on the actual card or by conman-sama. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 ... oCg errors. Full of 'em.\ Light is not a type, it is an attribute. It is also said like this: LIGHT Life Points gets capitalized. Your card is also overpowered when combined with DNA Transplant. meh. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conman-Sama Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 ok guys 3 thing everyone seems to be talking about dna transplant... im not going to use dna transplant xD so does it really matter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 6/10 Call it off topic but......I'm extremely tired of people writing 4 letter comments that do not state why the card would receive such a rating be it high or low. In my opinion' date=' this is a useless way to comment because there are no stated points that could possibly support or buttress your opinion and I'm quite sure no one is going to guess them. These comments can't be deemed as spam but is a branched off version of it.[/i'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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