[Written] Dark World Traveller (Link Monster)

[Monarch King]

DARK

Fiend/Link/Effect

Link Arrows: Left, Bottom

ATK 2000

 

2 "Dark World" monsters

Your opponent cannot target "Dark World" cards you control with card effects. You can discard 1 card, and if you do, Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Dark World" monster from your Deck or GY to your zone this card points to. You can only use this effect of "Dark World Traveller" once per turn.

[TOPsycho]

Just a few critiques on your card design, mate. Not hating at all, I do enjoy myself some Dark Worlds as well.

 

For one, all Dark World monsters have a play on a color in their name, so this card could be something like, "Kristel, Traveler of Dark World"

 

Also, Link monsters do not have Defense Points and cannot exist in Defense Position, so simply just change its ATK to the 2000 and that'll be fine

 

The Summon effect is okay in my opinion, though it might be smart to add in a cost part to the effect so it's more clear that the discard is part of the effect. Another good take would be to search a "Dark World" card, then discard.

 

And once again, I apologize if I seem overbearing or that I disapprove of your design.

 

Overall though, good card, keep it up!