raziellok79 Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 [i do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them.] I don't know who originally did the art I got them from Google Images. If I'm still breaking the rules with this post please tell me which ones so that I don't make the same mistakes in the future thank you. All these cards are from the fictional set "Advent Of The Storm". The first card was inspired by "Dark Red Enchanter". The next card was inspired by "Darklord Zerato" in terms of pure evil. Heres another card that was inspired by "Necroface" and "D.D. Dynamite". The final card was inspired by the God Cards and is in fact the Egyptian God of the Sky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Uhhh,you have to add [/img] at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maspe Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 uh yeah. we can not see them unless you do........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raziellok79 Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 ok thanks ok but blah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maspe Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 ok but blah<_< that was major spam now about the cards they are pretty cool and they have o.k. pictures so you get 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 ok but blah please stop that, card are, a, o.k. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Its nice to see new and fresh talent coming into the site. The cards and nice effort was obviously put forth into making them. The First Card: I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but you wrote, "During your Main Phase...." meaning you could activate its effect twice per turn *During both Main Phases* To stop this from being a problem simply add "Once per turn,..." in front of it. The Second Card: Correct OCG: "This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time a player activate a Spell or Trap card they must roll a flip a coin. If the result is tails, negate the activation of the card and return it to the owner's Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. When this card is destroyed, you may add 1 "Shu, Holder of the Sky" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. The Third Card: Correct OCG:This card can only be activated when your opponent activates a card effect that designates monsters currently removed from play as a target. Pay half your Life Points, negate the activation and effect of the card and destroy it. After this effect is resolved, shuffle all cards that are currently removed play and return them to their owner's deck. Inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card returned by this effect." Last Card:Correct OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 EARTH, 1 WATER, 1 WIND, monster in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase you may pay 1000 Life Points to return all cards on the field, in both player's, and in both player's Graveyard to their respective Decks. The Decks are then shuffled. Once this effect is resolved, both players draw 2 cards. I believe that's it. I Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raziellok79 Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Organization_XIII there is nothing wrong with the first card it can be activated as many times during your turn as long as you have the spell counters on it to pay for it's effect. The second card means when it is removed from the field just like "Yubel - Terror Incarnate"and it doesn't negate the activation of the spell or trap just the effect(s), I made it to work directly with the other 2 monsters I created. The third card means when any card(s) that is removed from play is being targeted no matter if it is a monster, spell or trap. The last card cannot be special summoned EXCEPT by that way it can't be special summoned from the graveyard if properly summoned first, of course it's effect is once per turn since after his effect has resolved it is no longer on the field. I've been playing this game since it's release and I appreciate your feedback but I don't appreciate you telling me how to word my cards. I've taken my knowledge of how cards are worded in many card games and applied it here; each card is self explanatory and doesn't need anyone to reword it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 [size=x-small][b][i]*Sigh* Just when I thought you were a new member who could take corrections that were meant to help you and in a good manner....You Post That. You may have been playing the game since it came out but you prove yourself wrong seeing that you have various Grammatical and OCG errors. OCG stands for Original Card Grammar and is the way cards are worded. On this site, especially in the Realistic Card Section, knowing such is critical. I was merely trying to help you on your errors whether you admit them or not. For the cards that you explained differently such as the first, I could not guess that you meant to use it both Main Phases, I just merely thought that you had forgotten to add it. For the Second Card; I was merely making the card a bit less overpowered because you simply tribute it and you would get to activate its effect. The Third Card; Again, I had no idea you meant all cards and was merely trying to help to my best knowledge. I really do not believe posting an explanation for myself about the Last Card is necessary because you could simply read your post and then read my previous explanations and get to the point just as quickly.[/i][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raziellok79 Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Organization_XIII I'm sorry I snapped at you, you were just trying to help and I am grateful. About my second card if you tribute it, it would miss the timing for its effect just like "Yubel-Terror Incarnate". I know I'm new here but I am a Yu-Gi-Oh judge and I try my best to understand how cards work. thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 It's fine, we're all here to learn and help each other. I believe I understand what you're saying about the second card. I too am a Yu-Gi-Oh player, although not a Judge. I did attempt once to become a UDE Level 1 Judge but in vain, but it doesn't matter because we fall so we can get back up again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raziellok79 Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 I agree with you there. I also reworded the cards a little to make them a little easier to grasp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 They have pretty good pictures. It's great to see a smart newcomer, getting inspiration from real YGO cards. It's good, and also, I like the effects, they're nice, long, and not simple....very nice...8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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