Blackmetal Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 My brother is Blackwind so I decided to make some cards about us both, just for fun.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 OMG I look sexy. :PAnyway, I saw those cards in the making, and helped you out with the text, so I know how hard you worked on these. I think they came out really good. Props ;) I wonder if I can give you a rep point, since it'd be awfully suspicious for brothers to rep one another... Anyway, great cards kid ;) EDIT:... waaait. I helped you out with these and didn't even notice you made me much weaker than you. You little.... -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 looks good, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afalpi Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Nice, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Good. 8/10Disclaimer please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Thanks guys :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 OMG O...M...G +2 REP THEESE ARE AMAZING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Love the Cards 9/10 = ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 nice cards, love the pics 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Cool! However, if Blackwind helped you, isn't that partial cheating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 No, I only helped him with the OCG and grammar, since he's 11. The ideas are entirely his. I don't think that's cheating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Oh, okay. I got confused. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 fire cardWhen this card attacks a face-up monster, you can switch the ATK and DEF of the attack target (during Damage Calculation only). second cardIf you control a face-up "Blackmetal" monster, during (no "each of") your opponent's Draw Phaseno "'s" or "," you can draw 1 card, then shuffle 1 card from your hand, into your Deck.skipping to the last part of your second cardselect 1 card and discard that card to the Graveyard. (no comma, and added to the Graveyard)over all some pretty nice cardsrating8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 There are some errors. You can switch the ATK and DEF of the targeted monster during the damage calculation only. You can negate the effect of that card and destroy it.(2) If you control 1 or more cards that has "Blackmetal" in their name, during each of your opponent's Draw Phases, Draw 1 card then return 1 card from your Hand to your Deck then shuffle your deck. When this card is destroyed look at your opponent's Hand, choose 1 card and discard it to the Graveyard. (3) All cards that have "Blackmetal" and "Blackwind" in their name are unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards controlled by you opponent. During each of your Standby Phases roll a six die, then activate 1 of the following effects: 1 or 2: Select 1 card that has "Blackmetal" or "Blackwind" in their name that you control, this turn the following monsters can attack twice. 3 or 4: Select 1 face-up card that includes "Blackmetal" or "Blackwind" in their name that you control, they can inflict direct damage to your opponent's Life Points this turn. 5 or 6: Your opponent draws 1 card from his Deck.Hope I helped you enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 During each of your Standby Phases roll a six die' date=' then activate 1 of the following effects: 1 or 2: Select 1 card that has "Blackmetal" or "Blackwind" in their name that you control, this turn the following monsters can attack twice. 3 or 4: Select 1 face-up card that includes "Blackmetal" or "Blackwind" in their name that you control, they can inflict direct damage to your opponent's Life Points this turn. 5 or 6: Your opponent draws 1 card from his Deck.[/quote'] Your suggestions have more mistakes than the original card. I'll point them out if you want me to, but I doubt it's needed. You're using old OCG that is not necessary, and you make the effect choice independent of the die result with that wording, among other mistakes. Thanks for your cooperation, but I don't think Blackmetal should follow those corrections... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Do you need to write "hope i helped" in every post, Crimson? Just wondering.Nice cards, Blackmetal. O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Do you need to write "hope i helped" in every post' date=' Crimson? Just wondering.[/quote'] the dude this he's Org XIII. lmao! i'm still familiarizing myself with TUNERS and SYNCHROS. still, i know enough to rate these cards. ocg errors aside...7.9 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 No I'm not Org XIII I'm just a little like him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Thanks guys :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Nice cards :) Cool effects and they seem pretty balanced to me. I'm even more impressed that you're 11 (even if your brother did help, that's still some impressive work)! Shame you couldn't give credit to the artist(s) though :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Thanks, but credit is given in the place of the card's edition... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 OCG is not perfect and Blackwind's art is overused. OK though.. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Thanks' date=' but credit is given in the place of the card's edition... ;)[/quote'] My bad :P I didn't notice - sorry about that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 No problem Rawlyn. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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