afalpi Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 It's my first card, so I hope it's fine. Edit: *after some OCG correction Here it is: pic credit:-bloodytearsfrom anime chain network It's a pretty simple card I just want you to check the OCG, the realism of the card n etc. Comments plz :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 it's not bad, but it's not very good either. It just passes off as decent. It has an over used picture, meaning the picture has been used by someone else in the past, and way too often too. But the oCG isn't shabby, thought I would probably word it like this... This card can only be equipped to a level 4 or lower Fire-type monster card. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster card by 800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 it's not bad' date=' but it's not very good either. It just passes off as decent. It has an over used picture, meaning the picture has been used by someone else in the past, and way too often too. But the oCG isn't shabby, thought I would probably word it like this... This card can only be equipped to a level 4 or lower Fire-type monster card. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster card by 800.[/quote'] Both of you are wrong; its; FIRE monster not Fire-Type. Thus; 'This card can only be equipped to a FIRE monster on your field. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 800.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 oh woops, then in that case Pyro-type or jusr FIRE...sorry DJ, lost my mind there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afalpi Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Ty for the info about over used pictures. Next time I'll try to check if people used the picture in the past.Ty for the OCG correction too.More comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Ty for the info about over used pictures. Next time I'll try to check if people used the picture in the past. I do doubt that you will go back through all the threads in the Realistic Cards Section to find a rare image that hasn't been used. If you do happen to complete such an endeavor' date=' more power to you. You usually figure out what images are overused, which artists are overused, and which are not by just being active on the forum and seeing other member's cards. DJ covered the OCG. I believe this card is slightly better than "Salamandra"? I believe that's its name. Well for a test card its not bad and its a great effort for a new member nice job. Hope I Helped[/i'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Mmm,a basic power-up equip spell eh,it's okay (6.4/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 The balance of this card is horrible; it's hopelessly underpowered. We already have Axe of Despair and United We Stand, and this card is inferior to them in every possible way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Unlike Axe of Despair and United We Stand though, it cannot be equipped to an opponents monster... so it cannot be "stolen" by the effect of a card such as Cyber Raider. Presumably if control of the equipped monster changes, then this card would be destroyed, as it is no longer on your side of the field. I'm not sure I like the dodgy lines across the slightly disproportionate image, but other than that I think it's a good card and fits well into the existing game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 I think it's very good for your first card. Crab is right in that it is probably underpowered, but that's a lot better than overpowered. Keep making cards like this and you'll do just fine on this site ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 yep, it is very good for your first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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