Yuuki Ortez Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Sky Dragon Idol. Disclaimer: Yomandas from deviantART. 1) Lore: If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position during the End Phase of this turn. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of turns it was Special Summoned by this effect x 400. If this card is Special Summoned in this way 8 times, destroy this card and remove it play. If this card is removed from play, you take 2000 points of Direct Damage to your Life Points. While this card remains on the field it can not be Tribute Summoned for a Level 5 monster or higher. This card may attack your opponent’s Life Points directly, if it does after the Damage Step remove this card from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Well they are ok but the first one's pic is kinda bad and the second one is a little better.There might be OCG errors but I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 The first, I must say, is completely useless because a card exists with much more playability. It is called "Brain Control." The Second Card: Correct OCG:If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position during the End Phase of this turn. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of turns it was Special Summoned by this effect x 500. If this card is Special Summoned in this way 8 times, destroy this card and remove it play. If this card is removed play, you take 2000 points of Direct Damage to their Life Points.One Word:BROKEN. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 I know it might be broken but when it's removed from play the controller of this monster takes 2000 life point damage. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position during the End Phase of this turn. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of turns it was Special Summoned by this effect x 500. If this card is Special Summoned in this way 8 times, destroy this card and remove it play. If this card is removed play, you take 2000 points of Direct Damage to your Life Points. I believe would be right. Thanks. Updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Yes, I misread that last part. I edited my previous post. 2000 Life Points is still not a fair draw back for a card which is better than Tree-Born Frog and save you even if your opponent has a full field of monsters and it can get up to 3500 Attack. Furthermore, it can then become a tribute fodder to stop you from taking 2000 Damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 I indend to make considerable changes to it, even I believe it needs far more draw backs. Maybe 100 ATK increase over 8 turns. And not being able to tribute it. Something to make it more playable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 300 ATK is fine. Also, why not mention, "You may pay 500 Life Points to...." to even it out? The "tribute" idea is good. Nice Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Card Updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 Nice balancing! I think raising its attack boost back to 400 his fine now seeing that if it attacks directly you instantly get 2000 Damage, that or 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 No problem, that's what we're all here for, to learn and to help others do the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 nice card but i saw some grammar problems...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 ocg problems, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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