Solarice04 Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Hello People! This is the first time I've posted anything on this Forum, so please correct me if I do something wrong. So, to get started, these first three cards are from Final Fantasy IX. This next card is from the old Transformer Cartoon. (Season 3, if you're curious.) And the effect:This monster is not destroyed as a result of battle at any time, although damage calculation is applied normally. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this monsters’ ATK by 500 points. During the standby phase of each turn this card is on the field, the controller of this card must pay Life Points equal to half of this monsters’ ATK. Whenever this card destroys a Machine-Type monster, special summon that monster to your side of the field in attack mode. Monsters summoned this way may not be destroyed and any special abilities they normally have are negated. In the show, this creature was called the Dweller in the Depths. Since there's already a card with that name, I changed the name to avoid confusion. So, what do you think? EDIT: Corrected some grammer and OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Not bad...for your fits cards....4.13042/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 ok for first...but you have OCG and Grammar problems... oh and also Sentence structure.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted April 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreezingNinja Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 ocg= official card grammer. look it up.good for ur first cards. 3.1415926/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 More cards here. The following cards are from Final Fantasy VIII. If you can find anything wrong with them, please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jackmanlord Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 i think you should have gotten some better visuals from final fantasy VIII or final fantasy eight but still there good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 It's a bit odd, but not half-bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 odd i must say that 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 I have a couple more cards, again based on the Transformers Cartoon. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 a little overpowered.......and the ocg needs some work.other than that, theyre good 4 ur first cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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