Neo-Grendel Posted July 2, 2007 Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 First cards I've made. What do you all think? Rate? Will be making more later. Enjoy. LONG OVERDUE EDIT: Retooled Gemhide and added the Field spell and accompaning Trap as well as a couple new Monster cards. Questions, Comments and Critisism are always welcome. :-P Thanks. SECOND EDIT: Retooled Might and Telekinetic. Hopefuly a bit more balanced. Any comments help. Thanks. EDIT #3 Three new cards 5/23/08 Let me know what you all think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted July 2, 2007 Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 What about "Sliver Legion?" And some are a bit overpowered, but it's a good start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted July 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 What about "Sliver Legion?" And some are a bit overpowered' date=' but it's a good start![/quote'] "Sliver Legion" is comming later. :-PWhat did you think was overpowered? *ready to take notes* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted July 2, 2007 Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 Okay, here. I'll comment on each card. There's not much to do right now as it is. Gemhide Sliver: Overpowered; it's already tought enough to draw, but if you have four slivers on the field, that's nearly a whole nother hand. And even with just one, it's still an extra card. That's four monsters your opponent's down when the card you drew was Mirror Force. Hunter Sliver: I really like this card. It's really original and totally balanced :) Telekenetic Sliver: Overpowered. You just destroyed your opponent's Mirror Force and Saku Armor. It would at least be limited. Vampiric Sliver: This one isn't half bad. As it is you rarely inflict more than 500 damage at once, so this is pretty balanced. Might Sliver: This one kinda starts to overpower Vampiric. You should lessen the increase to 500 or so. Brood Sliver: I have to see the Legion before I can really comment on this one. Sliver Queen: This one is kinda underpowered... It's only really useful other than strength if you're dueling against another Sliver deck. Hope that helped! These are really good starts, and are probably the best cards I've seen a new member post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted July 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 Okay' date=' here. I'll comment on each card. There's not much to do right now as it is. Gemhide Sliver: Overpowered; it's already tought enough to draw, but if you have four slivers on the field, that's nearly a whole nother hand. And even with just one, it's still an extra card. That's four monsters your opponent's down when the card you drew was Mirror Force. Hunter Sliver: I really like this card. It's really original and totally balanced :) Telekenetic Sliver: Overpowered. You just destroyed your opponent's Mirror Force and Saku Armor. It would at least be limited. Vampiric Sliver: This one isn't half bad. As it is you rarely inflict more than 500 damage at once, so this is pretty balanced. Might Sliver: This one kinda starts to overpower Vampiric. You should lessen the increase to 500 or so. Brood Sliver: I have to see the Legion before I can really comment on this one. Sliver Queen: This one is kinda underpowered... It's only really useful other than strength if you're dueling against another Sliver deck. Hope that helped! These are really good starts, and are probably the best cards I've seen a new member post.[/quote'] Thank you for the kind words. ^_^ I'll work a bit more on the first ones. I think I'll change the text of Telekinetic and Gemhide to Draw/destroy 1 card if there's another Sliver on the field and take your advice on Might and lower the boost to 500.As for "Sliver Legion", I can at least tell you the effect. It's a Cont. Trap."When this card is played, put 1 "Sliver Counter" on this card. Sliver Counters can be used in place of Tributes for Sliver Monsters, or to pay for Sliver effects." I plan on making more Slivers that have Tribute effects.Also Sliver Queen is supposed to work with the Field Spell "Hive Stone" Which turns all creatures on the field into Slivers. That also means they gain whatever effects the Slivers gain, of which there will be more. It also turns the S+T zone into S+T AND Monster card spaces for both players, allowing the swarming and effect building strategy of their Magic counterparts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted July 2, 2007 Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 Hmm... Clever. Well then, that should certainly add an interesting effect to gameplay! I can't wait to see how it turns out :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted July 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 Hmm... Clever. Well then' date=' that should certainly add an interesting effect to gameplay! I can't wait to see how it turns out :)[/quote'] Thank you very much. :-) I'll probobly post more tomorow. I plan on eventualy making a full 40-card deck based on them. It'll be mostly Monsters, about 30 or so, to make most use of the Hive Stone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeGallo Posted July 2, 2007 Report Share Posted July 2, 2007 nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 New content! What's everyone think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Not bad Freelance covered most of it. OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Not bad Freelance covered most of it. OCG errors. Errors? o.O Such as? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 I think he means your use of wording such as Slivers and "When a Sliver" etc, In some cards. The correct wording is: "Sliver" monster or "Sliver" monsters, which you did use at times, such as in your Hunter Sliver. So yeah, just patch those up. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsoldier Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Very original. I love it when someone tries to adapt Magic cards to Yugioh. Everyone else pretty much covered any criticism but they are still really nice. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Ok, hopefuly everything's fixed and I can start work on the next set of Slivers. :-P Questions, Comments, and Critisism are always welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-Grendel Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 New cards edit. More comming soon. Let me know what you all think. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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