2 New Cards

[Xamotorp]

Hope you like. Constructive comments/criticism appreciated (if you do comment on somethign i did wrong, explain what i can do to make it better instead of writing "overpowered" and then hitting Post Comment or w.e)

 

 

 

You can Tribute 3 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. If you do, destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon it during the End Phase of this turn with 0 ATK and 3000 DEF and is destroyed during the 2nd Standby Phase of your turn. You can only use this effect once per Duel.

Limit 1 Per Deck

 

Any Dragon Type + Any Beast Warrior Type

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization"). This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of the Fusion Material monsters used to Fusion Summon this card x 200. By sending the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.

[EDUCATION]

the effects are a bit unfair but otherwise fine 7/10 make the effects more fair/suitable

[Lucas Maximus]

Nice cards. ^_^

I dislike the first cards image though. Maybe give it a render.

8/10

[Atomix]

get rid of the border and the pic lol, 8/10

[Dark_Pride]

You can Tribute 3 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. If you do' date=' destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon it during the End Phase of this turn with 0 ATK and 3000 DEF for 3 turns. You can only use this effect once per Duel.[/quote']

Limit 1 Per Deck

 

-You can Tribute 3 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. If you do, destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon it during the End Phase of this turn with 0 ATK and 3000 and is destroyed during the 2nd Standby Phase of your turn. You can only use this effect once per Duel.

 

Any Dragon Type + Any Beast Warrior Type

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization"). By discarding 1 card from your deck, attack twice during your Battle Phase. This card gains ATK equal to the Level of the Fusion Material monsters x 200.

 

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization"). This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of the Fusion Material monsters used to Fusion Summon this card x 200. By sending the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.

[Rawlyn]

I like them, but I think they would be better if they only had one type (i.e. Warrior for the first one) and then in the card text you wrote "This card is also treated as Fiend-type when it is face-up on the field". I believe that when you start meddling around with making up too many subtypes, things start to get messy... Other than that, pretty cool. Oh, and squished images - get yourself some kind of cropping tool and they'd look loads better.

[shonenhikada]

good effects and would actually be used by people.

[Parting Shot]

Gah, the fusion monster just is not right. If you give the monster any question marks or Xs in it's ATK or DEF, you have to have a line in the effect that states what that value equals. And, no, saying "this card gains blah ATK and DEF for blah" does not count. For that effect, it would have to have a set value that increases when a certain condition is met.

 

Pick either ?? marks and change the effect to say "this card's atk is equal to" or pick increase the atk and give it some base points to start with.

[Grayall]

Crop images please.

Anyway, good cards. 8/10

[Rawlyn]

If you give the monster any question marks or Xs in it's ATK or DEF' date=' you have to have a line in the effect that states what that value equals. And, no, saying "this card gains blah ATK and DEF for blah" does not count. For that effect, it would have to have a set value that increases when a certain condition is met.

 

Pick either ?? marks and change the effect to say "this card's atk is equal to" or pick increase the atk and give it some base points to start with.

[/quote']

 

Very good point. The easiest way to fix this without effectively changing the card would be to give it 0 ATK. Remember there's a difference though between a card's original ATK/DEF and it's ATK/DEF after effects (as always with YGO, the devil is in the details). Even thought the 0 ATK method is very simple to implement, I would personally go for giving it ? ATK (just one ? is the OGC standard), and state "This card's original ATK becomes equal to the Level of the Fusion Material monsters used to summon it x 200".

 

Of course I only say that because I like a bit of Copycat action... and Copycat only cares about original ATK/DEF lol ;)

[The Ruby]

arts not great...

 

but it seems you have OCG down...

 

8/10

[bury the year]

Don't give it two types; put a line of text in the effect saying that it has another type.

[Xamotorp]

Oh awesome, thanks for the comments guys. The reason I put two types was because I didn't want to squish the text further but Ill go change them now and edit my post!