Evil Angel

[itakerN]

hey guys, this is my first card, so please give me tips what i can do better... in the next thread I try to put in more pictures.

Effect:

When this card attacks, its ATK and DEF will be increased by 100 points for every card in your opponent's graveyard. When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the graveyard, the first two cards on the top of your opponent's deck are sent to the graveyard.

 

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7343/75029ky8.jpg

[The Ruby]

 

there now everyone can see it...

 

EDIT: OCG errors...kepp working on that...^_^

[bury the year]

Decent for your first try. Work on OCg, though. Also, you need to close the . It won't display otherwise.

[Bloodrun]

here

 

yes errors

rating

6/10 so far.

[Slash]

It's ok, but nothin too special to see, 6.7/10

[Chevalier]

Well, it's a good effort for a New Member and it's nice to see that the card isn't attached. Unfortunately you do have a few errors. I'll do my best to fix them. In "Realistic Card Section" Divine-Beasts are smiled upon rarely and could be a dominant factor when rating your card. My suggestion, simply make it a Fiend or a Fairy-Type monster.

 

Now time for the OCG.

 

Correct OCG:

When this card attacks, it gains 100 ATK and DEF for each monster in your opponent's Graveyard. When this card successfully destroys a monster as a result of battle, send the top 2 cards of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

 

The card in itself is not bad but it might be a tad overpowered. I suggest you make a Tribute monster and then it would be completely balanced.

 

Hope I Helped