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Yankee

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Hello all,

I finally decided to end my long break, and make a card.

I really do hope you enjoy it.

Please rate and comment on it.

 

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This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card inflicts 2000 or more Damage to your opponent's Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the amount of damage inflicted. If the ATK of this card becomes 0, it is destroyed. During your Standby Phase, decrease your Life Points equal to half the ATK of this card. If your Life Points become 2000 or less, this card cannot attack directly, and gains the following effect: When this card attacks an opponent's monster in Defence Position with a ATK that is higher than the opponent's DEF, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

The image of this card can be found here:

Sophiel02 - closeup

 

 

Thanks you very much for looking,

 

Cheers,

Yankeefan ^_^

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Chevalier

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Glad to see that you're back Yankee. The card is very nice and well thought out. I think, though, you could've thought up a better ending effect than the common trample. I still really do like the card. I think, emphasis on think, that there is an OCG error.

Correct OCG:

This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card inflicts 2000 or more Damage to your opponent's Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the amount of damage inflicted. If the ATK of this card becomes 0, it is destroyed. During your Standby Phase, decrease your Life Points by an amount equal to half the ATK of this card. If your Life Points become 2000 or less, this card cannot attack directly, and gains the following effect: When this card attacks an opponent's monster in Defence Position with a ATK that is higher than the opponent's DEF, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

It may be an extra or unnecessary but I just thought that it was needed there.

Again, great card and glad to see that you're back.

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Bloodrun

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Glad to see that you're back Yankee. The card is very nice and well thought out. I think' date=' though, you could've thought up a better ending effect than the common trample. I still really do like the card. I think, emphasis on think, that there is an OCG error.

Correct OCG:

This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card inflicts 2000 or more Damage to your opponent's Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by the amount of damage inflicted. If the ATK of this card becomes 0, it is destroyed. During your Standby Phase, decrease your Life Points by an amount equal to half the ATK of this card. If your Life Points become 2000 or less, this card cannot attack directly, and gains the following effect: When this card attacks an opponent's monster in Defence Position with a ATK that is higher than the opponent's DEF, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

It may be an extra or unnecessary but I just thought that it was needed there.

Again, great card and glad to see that you're back.

 

it should be

increase your Life Points by half of the original ATK of this monster.

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Thanks you very much ^_^

BTW' date=' blood, I actually put the artists name on the cards...

 

Anyway, thanks alot slash! ^_^

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yes

but a link is reguired lol

rating

9/10

 

a link is not required if you give credit to the artist

 

I don't post a link to the artist

 

Yankee, I don't know if you want me to rate this card.

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Bloodrun

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Thanks you very much ^_^

BTW' date=' blood, I actually put the artists name on the cards...

 

Anyway, thanks alot slash! ^_^

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yes

but a link is reguired lol

rating

9/10

 

a link is not required if you give credit to the artist

 

I don't post a link to the artist

 

Yankee, I don't know if you want me to rate this card.

 

a link should be required

people could be making up the artist =/

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Yankee Explorer

Yankee

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remix, please do rate, and, it doesn't matter if it's not required. I'll just post the link in my thread, ok?

 

Please do rate.

And thank you very much orginiation ^_^

I am glad you like it

Blood, it should not be increase your life points by....

It should be DECREASE XD

Also, I intended for it to decrease not by the originla attack, but by the decreasing attack, so the damage gets smaller. It would make it so you almost would WANT to lower the ATK of the card. I made it so this card can go through many strategies ^_^

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Bloodrun

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remix' date=' please do rate, and, it doesn't matter if it's not required. I'll just post the link in my thread, ok?

 

Please do rate.

And thank you very much orginiation ^_^

I am glad you like it

Blood, it should not be increase your life points by....

It should be DECREASE XD

Also, I intended for it to decrease not by the originla attack, but by the decreasing attack, so the damage gets smaller. It would make it so you almost would WANT to lower the ATK of the card. I made it so this card can go through many strategies ^_^

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ok, i wasnt trying to copy the sentence word for word, i just wanted to get the point across

and that would be a good addition to the effect

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it's a great card but...some Grammar errors...

 

Incorrect

...opponent's monster in Defence Position with a ATK that is higher than the opponent's DEF, inflict the difference as damage...

 

*Just a mispell and a missing "n"

 

Correct

...opponent's monster in Defense Position with an ATK that is higher than the opponent's DEF, inflict the difference as damage...

 

other than that...9/10...^_^

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remix' date=' please do rate, and, it doesn't matter if it's not required. I'll just post the link in my thread, ok?

 

Please do rate.

And thank you very much orginiation ^_^

I am glad you like it

Blood, it should not be increase your life points by....

It should be DECREASE XD

Also, I intended for it to decrease not by the originla attack, but by the decreasing attack, so the damage gets smaller. It would make it so you almost would WANT to lower the ATK of the card. I made it so this card can go through many strategies ^_^

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Disclaimer: Remix Duelist cannot be held responsible for any comments that might be harsh in the following post. This post was requested by the creator of this thread.

 

I think the card is really boring.

 

The picture is ok, but I don't like the card at all.

 

It's not original. All you did was combine effects of other cards added a picture, a name, and other stats.

 

The card is incredibly underpowered.

 

It should be a Level 4 monster.

 

My Rating: 4/10 (3/10 for the picture, 1/10 for the name)

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Bloodrun

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remix' date=' please do rate, and, it doesn't matter if it's not required. I'll just post the link in my thread, ok?

 

Please do rate.

And thank you very much orginiation ^_^

I am glad you like it

Blood, it should not be increase your life points by....

It should be DECREASE XD

Also, I intended for it to decrease not by the originla attack, but by the decreasing attack, so the damage gets smaller. It would make it so you almost would WANT to lower the ATK of the card. I made it so this card can go through many strategies ^_^

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Disclaimer: Remix Duelist cannot be held responsible for any comments that might be harsh in the following post. This post was requested by the creator of this thread.

 

I think the card is really boring.

 

The picture is ok, but I don't like the card at all.

 

It's not original. All you did was combine effects of other cards added a picture, a name, and other stats.

 

The card is incredibly underpowered.

 

It should be a Level 4 monster.

 

My Rating: 4/10 (3/10 for the picture, 1/10 for the name)

 

well im glad you warned him first lol

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Yankee

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lol,

I actually expected a rate like that from you remix ^_^

I actually did NOT copy effects and mix them, but it's good to know that there are effects that are alot like this, don't wanna be completly alone XD

And as for the underpowerd, well, it all depends on your situation and what kind of deck it's used in...

 

Though, I do apriciate the rate. I will be making more cards later with better effects.

Thank you very much remix ^_^

 

BTW, Blood, i'm fairly certain that was spam there, lol

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Bloodrun

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lol' date='

I actually expected a rate like that from you remix ^_^

I actually did NOT copy effects and mix them, but it's good to know that there are effects that are alot like this, don't wanna be completly alone XD

And as for the underpowerd, well, it all depends on your situation and what kind of deck it's used in...

 

Though, I do apriciate the rate. I will be making more cards later with better effects.

Thank you very much remix ^_^

 

BTW, Blood, i'm fairly certain that was spam there, lol

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BTW, Yank, i'm fairly sure that you did mix effects

your last part of the effect, "trample" your part about if the atk is at 0, copied, from one of your others.

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