larharlx Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Okay, this is just the first 10 cards of a set im making, i know their are quite a few errors but before i correct them or make more i wanted to know it people think their good, quite a few of them are based off of real cards but please tell me what you think.I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE PICTURES- I got all of these pictures from photobucket, so i dont know who the artists are(i went back to look for links and their were duplicate pictures so idk which ones i used). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 You actually need to credit the REAL artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 ok Type, Graveyard, Deck all need to be capitalizedand when you write a number in a card effect it must be in numerical formthere are more errors im sure, im just not in the reading mood right nowrating as of so far6/10"credit artist please" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
larharlx Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 I know their are tons of errors, I saw all of them (My nephew typed them well i was eating) I saw them i didnt take the time to correct them yet, he even messed up three of the card names actually... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 I know their are tons of errors' date=' I saw all of them (My nephew typed them well i was eating) I saw them i didnt take the time to correct them yet, he even messed up three of the card names actually...[/quote'] well the fact that there are errorsis heavily out weighedby the fact that you did not credit the artist. edit:sorry didnt notice that you edit your postmy appologies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pycotopia Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 make more or i kill you and hand your corpse over to necrophiliacs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
larharlx Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 umm- okay...Well i have made more but im gonna wait to post them well i check the OCG and try and find better pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 make more or i kill you and hand your corpse over to necrophiliacs some one mention me nice 8/10 fairly balanced (ignoring the OCG issues) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 The continuous spell is effectively identical to Toon World (apart from the name). The text on Toon World reads "Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card.", so I guess yours should probably read the same.Try cropping the images before putting them in the cards, they won't look all squished and ugly. There's some dodgy OCG throughout, but I like some of the cards - particularly Unexpected Charity - great for deck destruction purposes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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