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jawz7

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There's quite a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but I'm sure your teacher will let you know about them when you hand in your project. :)

 

I won't moan about the "Dragon warrior" type because I know a lot of people love fictional monster types (I personally abhor them), but you should really capitalise "warrior" to fit with OGC standards.

 

A lot of poor OGC text...

 

Battle Tested Dragon:

When this card is attacked by a non-Dragon or Dragon Warrior-type monster, increase the DEF of this card by 600.

(This is massively overpowered in my opinion).

 

Breavius Dragon of Fire:

On the whole, the attribute of a Divine-Beast is DIVINE, and they should really require special summoning conditions of some sort - and be higher than level 6. Make this a standard Dragon and it'd be okay.

 

Jakalz, Ruler of the Underworld:

When "Jakalz Pet" is on the field, this card gains 3000 ATK.

(I would actually say this card is underpowered - it takes two tributes, but if you lose your "Jakalz Pet" you've suddenly got 0 ATK again... lame!)

 

Light and Dark:

All LIGHT and DARK monsters gain 800 ATK and DEF.

(This is massively overpowered in my opinion).

 

Light of Renewal:

An equip that recovers LP? When? When it's equipped? Once per turn? If once per turn, during which phase? In it's current state, this card doesn't make any sense.

 

 

I hope this advice can help you improve your project and get a better grade! :)

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