Ring_king Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 To anyone who feeds back Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pycotopia Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 nice they seem balanced my only criticism is that names don't match the pics very well i give 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 When this card is destroyed, you can remove it from play to inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 LV4 monster from your Deck to the Field. If the selected card is a Dragon-Type monster, increase its ATK by 200 points, if the selected card is not a Dragon-Type monster decrease its ATK by 200 points.Hope I Helped. If you need anything else just PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 To expand on Crimson Ninja's version, I think they would be better if they read: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 LV4 monster from your Deck to the Field. If the selected card is a Dragon-Type monster, increase it's ATK by 200 points. Otherwise decrease it's ATK by 200 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Rawlyn I've to tell you that I haven't seen any yugioh card say otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ring_king Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Problem with yours is removing it from play and inflicting the damage isnt optional. The second one would be an improvement though. Thanks for feeding back :). Oh and I'm adding more so please check back.With worm dragon I'm taking a slight risk that it may be too strong - if you give 3000 lifepoints he becomes awesome although his attack doesnt improve - you'd need other methods such as equip spell cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Combie Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Nice cards 8/10. How can I post cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ring_king Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Combie, I'll pm you. Please everyone who sees this keep checking back - I'm adding more dragons until I'v got a full set of around twenty. Also when you feed back please name your favourite dragon :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redfox Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Worm dragon and doom dragon have a bit to powerfull effects but oterwise ,awesome!!!!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Their alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ring_king Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 I think grass or abyssal dragon is my favourite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phatt Mann Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 They're good cards. keep up the good work! 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 The pic for venom dragon is already an actual card called infernal dragon. other than that it was ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Decent, but OCG needs brushing up on. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Combie Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 They get better and better... I love balanced cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Gunners Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 They are quite weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ring_king Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Please everyone who has fed back vote on the poll I just added (and keep feeding back ofc) and perhaps would anyone mind giving a little inspiration? Just give me a new type of dragon to do and I'll do the rest - no need to tell me effects or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Rawlyn I've to tell you that I haven't seen any yugioh card say otherwise.Try these' date=' CN:Mind CrushNeo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin Ring_King: A couple of criticisms...(1) When you put a word in capitals (such a FIRE or WIND), it's because you're describing the type - I'm not sure where you're headed with putting VOLCANO and so on in capitals... If you mean "monsters with 'volcano' in their name", then you'd write "'Volcano' monsters" (except I think you probably mean "'Volcanic' monsters".(2) Rather than writing "SUN tokens", I think it should be "'Sun token'".(3) Rather than "8 stars", it's usually written "Level 8" (I think!). But apart from the OCG errors, I like these cards and their effects. I gave you a 9/10 on your poll. :D An easy way to check how the OGC should work for all these things would be to look at a real card that uses similar terminology or a similar effect (e.g. Volcanic or Six Samurai monster cards for (1), Scapegoat or Stray Lambs for (2), Lighten the Load or Reinforcement of the Army for (3)). A couple of useful sites for looking stuff up: http://yugioh.wikia.com/ and http://www.netrep.net/. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 ehhhthere OKid give it a 5/10 but if you got the following thingsill make it a 10/10- Better Pics (Dig Man Dig!!)- Better effects- original effects- Better OCG- Base your effects on something. I see that its all utter randomness. Try Baseing it on somethingLike my Commission monstersThey are based off of being commission summoned from your deck ohand 1 last tipits Life Pointsnot lifepoints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 the cards are good but the names arent very creative and i think one of those pics is actually from a card. about 7/10 i'd say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 i think one of those pics is actually from a cardAny chance of saying which one? It might help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Hero Ant Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Isn't Venom Dragon already a made card called Infernal Dragon.. lol?Overall.. 5/10..But cards are OK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pycotopia Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 nice cards try evening out some of the effects and fix the pictures like skeletal dragon needs the edges taking off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ring_king Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Thanks everyone. I'm working on a new one now but please keep feeding back and etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cero Oscuras Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 if this is a set put it in the set cardsgeez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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