celticgaurdian Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Here's my first attempts at some cards on this site. I decided it would be easiest to start with some anime cards and I like FMA so here they are. Image by AnimeBlackAngel on deviantart.com I know the effect here is a little confusing but basically his effects work on cards in your opponent's Zones that are in line with the Zone he is placed in. I was thinking this could serve the double purpose of not only getting a jump on the opponent when he is first summoned, but also restricting where your opponent places their cards. Combine it with something like Ground Collapse and suddenly your opponent is pretty short on options! Image by ~cat-cat on deviantart.com This effect is pretty straight forward. I think the effect fits with the whole fire thing. I considered giving him more ATK, but I thought it would be better to make it a little more difficult to use his effect, otherwise I might have to bump him into the next level bracket. I also considered changing his effect to only target opponent cards, but I think leaving it open to destroying your own cards as well is more fun. Image by !destructo- on deviantart.com I think this pic is sweet, but maybe a little intense for a rather mundane card ;) For this card and for the Ed card I wanted to emphasize the bond between the Elrich Brothers. Image by ~MrMorgoth on deviantart.com Hehe...another intense pic for a mundane card *sigh* The more I think about it I think this brother combo might be a bit overpowered, if you think so I'm open to suggestions on how to fix it. Image by ~nebt-het on deviantart.com Weird I know, but it fits with the show I think...or maybe not. Image by ~Dalamar789 on deviantart.com Image by ~nathkaX3 on deviantart.com Image by *Kiriska on deviantart.com Just found this image in a google search. There wasn't a credit for it. Image by ~Asriel-Chan on deviantart.com I know that the pics on these new cards aren't the best, but I had trouble finding better ones. Anyone who knows were I can find some better ones/has better ones I'd greatly appreciate it. Also pointing out OCG errors or typos is always helpful. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizuku Kagirinai Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 They're Okay. They need slightly better names (Like 'FullMetal Alchemist - Edward Elric', 'Flame Alchemist - Roy Mustang' and 'StrongArm Alchemist - Louis Armstrong'), and needs some OCG errors correcting (And slightly better pics, especially for Armstrong). My overall score: 6/10. If you edit them with the tips I just gave you, I'll give you a 9/10 =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celticgaurdian Posted April 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 HaHa! Yeah the Armstrong pic is a little ridiculous, but I had trouble finding a better one and I thought it kind of fit his character from the show anyway. Where are the OCG errors? I figured I had some, but I'm new at this so if you could point them out that would be much appreciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizuku Kagirinai Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 They're only simple Grammatical errors, like occasionally not capitalising certain terms etc etc. (Such as 'in Battle' should be 'by Battle') Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Hmm... Don't watch the show, but the effects are good enough. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 theyre prety good. ^-^ive never seen the show eithermostly just some OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest King of Games Posted April 26, 2008 Report Share Posted April 26, 2008 Armstrong is a bit like Senet cards. i like 'em so 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celticgaurdian Posted April 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 A couple new cards added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.:Shaymin:. Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Don't make fake typesGood picsGood OCGWell balanced cards7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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