my second bunch of cards

[-Chaos Zero-]

here r the cards

[Typhoon brightness]

holy hell.. BIG DIFFERENCE. there awsome compared to others..!! 9/10 exept for last card.

[-Chaos Zero-]

why is that one not as good as the others

[Typhoon brightness]

the pic let it down a bit , but otherwise okay effect.

[Yusei Fudou]

Warrior From A Different Dimension:

 

Can be renamed to D.D. Swordsman (since D.D. Warrior is already used) -0.25

When this card is destroyed as the result of the effect of an opponent's Spell Card* -1.0

Forgot a comma after "card". -0.25

discard 1 card from your hand to destroy* -0.5

Forgot the dot at the end of description. -0.25

 

Total Rating: 7.75/10

 

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Warrior lady of the Dark Fortress

 

Lady should be capital. -0.25

when this card destroys a Fairy-Type monster as a result of battle, increase its ATK by 500.* -1.5

 

Total Rating: 8.25/10

 

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Wind Axe of Destruction

 

Effect text should be:

This card can be only equipped to Warrior-Type monsters. When this card is activated, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the opponent's side of the field. -5.0

 

Total Rating: 5/10

 

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You NEED improvement. Read good tuts and original cards to improve your OCG. I went easy on you on rating because you're a newbie.

[starly]

10/10