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..That's because your card is a wall of text, and it's small.

 

Correct OCG: This card cannot be Special Summoned. By paying half your Life Points, you can Normal Summon this monster without a Tribute. If this card is attacked, you can return it to your hand and Special Summon a "Computer Token" (6 Stars/Light/Machine/0 ATK/2500 DEF) onto your side of the field. As long as that token remains face-up on your side of the field, neither player can draw a card outside of their Draw Phase.

 

It'd be nice if you made a separate token too.

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Correct OCG: This card cannot be Special Summoned. By paying half your Life Points' date=' you can Normal Summon this monster without a Tribute. If this card is attacked, you can return it to your hand and Special Summon [b']1[/b] "Computer Token" (6 Stars/Light/Machine/0 ATK/2500 DEF) onto your side of the field. As long as a "Computer Token" remains face-up on your side of the field, neither player can draw a card outside of their Draw Phase.

 

Your OCG change was very close; there was a few erros, though. I like the card, 8.5/10

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Correct OCG: This card cannot be Special Summoned. By paying half your Life Points' date=' you can Normal Summon this monster without a Tribute. If this card is attacked, you can return it to your hand and Special Summon [b']1[/b] "Computer Token" (Machine-Type/LIGHT/Level 6/ATK 0/DEF 2500) onto your side of the field. As long as a "Computer Token" remains face-up on your side of the field, neither player can draw a card outside of their Draw Phase.

 

Your OCG change was very close; there was a few erros, though. I like the card, 8.5/10

Lol, it's still wrong. It never says "stars" on a card, except for Ritual cards. I re-corrected the above correction.

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Overall, it's an interesting card(especially with the OCG repairs). My only two complaints about it are that...

-The image could use a little resizing so it's not cutting off the top and bottom.

-I believe this card could us a better name.

Course, those are just my opinions. ;)

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