Khalleb Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Ola, everyone! This is just an idea for a set...WRAITH CARDS!OH yeah...Here, this is the first card... The pic is by Shapercreator14, but I edited it a bit... By Khalleb CARD TXT: Whilw this card is face-up on your side of the field you have to pay 300 life points during each of your End phases. If you do not, this card is removed from play. This card can attack your opponent's life points directly. If it does, decrease the ATK of this card by 1000. By paying 1500 life points, increase the ATK of this card by 500. If this card is Special Summoned, increase it's ATK by 200. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 damage to both your and your opponent's life points. The second two: By Khalleb CARD TXT: Pay 1000 life points, and remove 2 Wraith-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Special Summon 1 "Reszhi-ael" from your deck. The card Special Summoned by this effect is unaffected by Spell, Trap or Effect monsters effects until the end of the turn in which this card has been activated. By Khalleb CARD TXT: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Wraith Lord's Release". When this card attacks, change all your opponent's face-up monsters to Attack Position. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can place it in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continous Trap Card instead of sending it to your opponent's Graveyard. During each of your End Phases, gain life points equal to the number of Continous Trap Cards in your Spell & Trap Card Zone x200. Another one! CARD TXT: When this card is Summoned (in any way), you can discard 1 card from your hand. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard. If the Summoned monster was a Wraith-Type monster, your opponent skips his/her next Battle Phase. By khalleb CARD TXT: This card can only be equipped to a Wraith-Type monster, and only by paying 500 life points. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK, and cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is removed from the field, the equipped monster is removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 official type? otherwise this wont do much.... ooh and its overpowered, 1800 direct is alot either way you look at it... 1800 + 1300= 3100 + 800= 3900 + 300= 4100 max dmg before this card hits the graveyard. the 1500 Life Point gain for 750 ATK is more than fair because your still doing 2550 per turn and as long as you dont have any s/t to worry about the duel is over pretty fast.as for the 1000lp loss to both players only adds to this carnage sorry... great effort for a newbie though ^_^ 9/10 because i think the effort was great lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khalleb Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Thx for the...criticism...Like the way you think...yeah, I guess the card's a bit broken...Heh... As you said, I'm a newb... :lol: I'm gonna try and make the future wraith cards a bit more normal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 lol congratz that was my first fully broken down review in a month lol. and i corrected my math in the first post... i was typing a bit fast..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 By paying 1000 Life Points each turn, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If it does, this cards ATK is decreased by 500 points, by paying 1500 Life Points, this cards ATK is increased by 750, if this card is Special Summoned, increase it's ATK by 200. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 damage to both your and your opponent's life points.Hope I Helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 dude, ask before you balance and if you arent gonna ask.. at least make a suggestion, dont rewrite the whole effect.... kinda rude lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Well it's not rude because I'm helping a member. You think helping is rude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Well it's not rude because I'm helping a member. You think helping is rude. when someone didn't ask for it, yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khalleb Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Here, added two new cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Khalleb is it OK for me to correct your card if it's wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 New types... yuck!Otherwise, some nice ideas :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Pride Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 For Devourer:CARD TXT: This card can attack your opponent's life points directly. If it does, decrease the ATK of this card by 500. By paying 1500 life points, increase the ATK of this card by 750. If this card is Special Summoned, increase it's ATK by 200. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 damage to both your and your opponent's life points. Some suggestions: *State that the 750 ATK increase lasts until the End of the turn, and can be done once per turn only. (If not, then imagine, you can pay at most 7500 Life Points to increase its ATK by 3750. So it means that its ATK will become 5950, or 6150 if Special Summoned. So when it direct attacks opponent, the highest damage that could be done is 5650, almost an OTK and remember that the ATK increase is permanent, so next turn it would be a win.)*Make it a double tribute monster OR decrease its ATK to around 2100-1900 and please state that the 500 ATK decrease happens during the damage calculation only. Next CardCARD TXT: Pay 1000 life points, and remove 2 Wraith-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Special Summon 1 "Reszhi-ael" from your deck.(The card Special Summoned by this effect is unaffected by Spell, Trap or Effect monsters effects until the end of the turn in which this card has been activated) Remove the parenthesis and include the text inside as a part of the effect. Last card:CARD TXT: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Wraith Lord's Release". When this card attacks, change all your opponent's monsters to Attack Position (Question: Are flip effects activated?). When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can place it in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continous Trap Card instead of sending it to your opponent's Graveyard. You gain life points equal to the number of Continous Trap Cards in your Spell & Trap Card Zone x200 (during each of your Standby Phases, if you want the effect to be continuous). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khalleb Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 oh yeah, forgat a few things... I'll correct it now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khalleb Posted May 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 *bump*come on people, this is my biggest thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 5, 2008 Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 I'm all into Evil looking things, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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