AngelicStarlight Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Here's mine! What's yours?!?:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 They are pretty bad.Some minor errors but good. Keep practicing and you will get better 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelicStarlight Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Sorry, i'll remember that. it's my first time. what's IMG codes? I like your card by the way. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Dont double post.To post your cards in IMG codes, click on the card in the card creator, and copy the link that apears into your post.Nice card, but it is a little overpovered. A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelicStarlight Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 thanks Diedra. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6653/77387ef4.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Petal Fairy looks like an overpowered Dancing Fairy to me... I'm not too keen on the idea of giving a monster with such a good effect such a lot of ATK and DEF - it makes it too easy to heal 1000s of LP in no time at all.Gift of Friendship has a couple of errors. You never divide a card effect into paragraphs, and the OCG is a little iffy... Yu-Jo Friendship it says "...each player's Life Points become half the combined Life Points of both players." - it might be worth copying that text, as it seems pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caml1997 Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 they are ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twelve Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 That fairy is wayyyyy to powerfull...it needs a downside. Nice cards though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 i would say for those 2:Petal Fairy: As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, increase your Life Points x 1000 each time you draw a card. Gift of Friendship: Discard 1 card. Each player's Life Points become half the combined Life Points of both players. the effects of petal fairy are way too good.. 1) petal fairy has really high ATK for such a good effect. 2) gift of friendship isnt too bad but really isnt too good either.. who uses Yu-Jo-Friendship anyways.. anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Is this the card you wanted to show? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 It's okJust do not put the Spaces like this in an effect. It really does screw it up =/Also, try not to put effect/effectWhen you click effect, it already puts that part there. There also OCG errors, but good work overall ^_^5.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
v8561v Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Petal Fairy is Dancing fary on steroids (lol,I'm imagining....)The second card is,tecnically, Yu-Jo friendship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelicStarlight Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 thanks you guys, but why not show off some of your cards? i might get some new ideas or such... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 @Diedra: Goddess/Warrior/Effect/Effect?.... Eww! I'm not a fan of making up new types (I see it as a subtle form of overpowering), so in my opinion that card should be Warrior / Effect. I would also lose the whitespace, and possibly change the wording to Increase the ATK and DEF of this monster by 200 every time a card is removed from the field. or Increase the ATK and DEF of this monster by 200 every time a card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. But I don't think "destroyed on the field" is good OCG. Also it should be "pay 1000", not "tribute 1000". Otherwise it's a good card, I like it! :) @AngelicStarlight: I'll say the same about fictional types - I think it's a subtle form of overpowering (where are all the cards to destroy/negate Angel-type monsters? There aren't any!), so I personally don't like that part. I'd also say that 1900/2000 is overpowered for a normal level 4... high ATK or high DEF is fine, but I don't think it should have both. (Are angels that hardcore anyway? lol!) Cool picture though, would make an excellent Fairy-type :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 thanks you guys' date=' but why not show off some of your cards? i might get some new ideas or such... [/quote']hehe right under my sig u will find my card threads.. pls overlook them and review. btw were not supposed to post cards on anyone else's card thread... but if u want ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 They're very bad.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Petal Fairy looks like a monster version of Solemn Wishes x2 (4/10,due to poor originality in card effect)Gift of Friendship also has no originality (3/10) (there's already another Spell Card with that kind of effect-The Yu-Jo Friendship) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Yeah thats absalutly right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelicStarlight Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 Rawlyn, War Goddess Of Divine Wind is MY card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 Rawlyn' date=' War Goddess Of Divine Wind is MY card.[/quote'] Really? Weird.In that case, that whole message is aimed at you... enjoy! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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