DK NOBOYUKI Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 This Is some of my Cards so far please leave feed back Just to let anyone know i made the pictures myself i do all my own work so if you think im jus taking pictures ur wrong, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Grammar errors. It should say "If this card destroys a mosnter as a result of battle, this card may attack again once in a row." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 thanks i was tryna figure out wat to say i knew it didnt sound correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
v8561v Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 You need to improve this cards.You REALLY need to improve them.I'll just give you the worst 2 errors:OCG and putting description in the effect and Synchro cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 A few OCG errors. need to edit Akuma... 5.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 thanks for the feed back im working on the changes now plz people more feedback i need the feed back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 anyone wanna comment on the card plz do so i kno what to do and what not to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 i will release more cards soon i have them ready my computer is acting up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shino Aburame Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 ... Very... Odd... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 1st of all dont triple post.... and seconed they are ok but since chibis are like migits with half of the power of their Bigger better frorms dont make them 1900 ATK. But their your cards so you can...i suppose. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youngkirbymaster Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 You forgot lee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 dark hadou ryu's effect says - this card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned. this card can only be summoned with the effect of darkness hadou. when this card is special summoned it destroys all monsters on the feild. this is rich coming from me but... MISTAKE 1 - 'when this card is special summoned it destroys all monsters on the feild.' this part of his effect cant happen as he cant be special summoned. mistake 2 - many ocg errors. it should probably say something like - This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by the effects of the spell card 'Darkness Hadou'.* When this card is succesfully summoned destroy all monsters on the feild exept this card. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. *Wouldnt that make him a ritual monster and you havent made Darkness Hadou yet, just saying so dont berrate me. some pics are a little disturbing or is it just me? anyways 4/10 soz5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 dark hadou ryu's effect says - this card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned. this card can only be summoned with the effect of darkness hadou. when this card is special summoned it destroys all monsters on the feild. this is rich coming from me but... MISTAKE 1 - 'when this card is special summoned it destroys all monsters on the feild.' this part of his effect cant happen as he cant be special summoned. mistake 2 - many ocg errors. it should probably say something like - This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by the effects of the spell card 'Darkness Hadou'.* When this card is succesfully summoned destroy all monsters on the feild exept this card. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. *Wouldnt that make him a ritual monster and you havent made Darkness Hadou yet' date=' just saying so dont berrate me. some pics are a little disturbing or is it just me? anyways 4/10 soz5/10[/quote'] i noticed all of my errors i havent gotten back around to my chibi deck cuz im working on my kingom hearts set in the pop section check tht out im going to fix these up next mnth cuz im working hard now to finish the Kingdom set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 oh, ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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