Inferno Ninja

[Father Wolf]

help on ocg please.

Image from my custom archive.

[EliminateHRN]

Here how I think it should be written

 

"When this card is destroyed by one of the following, apply the following effect:

Monster: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell: Both players draw 1 card at the End Phase this card was destroyed.

Trap: Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your Deck to the graveyard."

 

It is pretty good 7.2/10

[Machovict]

My OCG:

 

"When this card is destroyed by one of the following, apply the following effect:

Monster: Inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell: Both players draw 1 card at the End phase of the turn this card was destroyed.

Trap: Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your deck to the Graveyard."

 

It's not too different, but it sounds better.

[Chevalier]

Actually, both of you are wrong because he stated that for the first effect "Destroyed by battle" so making it a monster effect would ultimately change the whole card.

 

Correct OCG:

"When this card is destroyed by one of the following, apply the following effect:

As a result of battle: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell: Both players draw 1 card at the End Phase this card was destroyed.

Trap: Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your Deck to the graveyard."

[Bloodrun]

End Phase, Deck and Graveyard needs to be caped

and when you write a number in a card effect, it must be in numerical form, 1 not one lol

rating

8/10

[Tefached]

very nice card and image wolf

 

the pic reminds me from armored ninja and burning warrior #1 [i think thats the right name]

[Guest KAJN]

When this card is destroyed by one of the following, activate the following effects.

As a result of battle: Inflict 100 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell Card: Both players draw 1 card at the End Phase this card was destroyed.

Trap Card: Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your Deck to your Graveyard.

[Father Wolf]

thanks for the help everyone

 

very nice card and image wolf

 

the pic reminds me from armored ninja and burning warrior #1 [i think thats the right name]

 

armored ninja and dark fire warrior, i think?

[Tefached]

yea thats the right name.

[Sailor Gourmet]

I would say it is pretty good.

8.7/10.

[Atomix]

Awesome pic wolf just some OCG errors,

 

"When this card is destroyed by one of the following, apply the following effect:

As a result of battle: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell: Both players draw 1 card at the End Phase this card was destroyed.

Trap: Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your Deck to the graveyard."

[Lord Ursus]

I think it should say:

"When this card is destroyed, select and activate 1 of the following effects based on the way it was destroyed".

Nice card and über nice art.

O.

[Encalade Shinamisu]

8/10, pretty good, just correct your spelling.

[OvoMaster]

i give it 9/10, The effect is very nice and versatile.I dont really know how to write this effect with correct ocg but i think i'd be like this:

When this card is destroyed by one of the following, apply the Appropriate effect:

Monster: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Spell:Both players draw 1 card on the End Phase of the turn this card was destroyed

Trap:Send 1 "Flame Ninja" from your Deck to your Graveyard

hope i helped =P