overheat Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 for the first chapter[spoiler=Click to view] in this story 2 main chracters trance : cyber dragon deck Sho : GOD Cards Deck. chapter one The New Guy Sho was New At School and he had no friend. his only friend was " the winged dragon of ra" Sho lived in a time were GoD cards were lame and not good. but Sho did not care he put his heart in his deck.At school he saw this kid name Trance winning a Duel. Sho wanted to Duel and Get a firend so he came in and said " I chalange you to a Duel.Trance Smiled and said "lets do this" DUel.Trance : i will start. Draw ! i set a card(masked dragon) and play 1 face down. i end my turnSho: mmm Draw ! i play D.D. Warrior Lady and attack you face down.Trance: you activated his effect.i special sum....Sho: no you dont by the effect of D.D. Warrior Lady both cards are send to the remve from play. and then i play 1 card face down.Trance : Draw! i play Cyber Phoenix in attack mode. and i attack.Sho : i play the trap card Mirror Force and so i am saved.Sho: Draw ! i play " Dimensional Fissure" and then play "Foolish Buiral" by the effect of " Foolish Burial i send one Monster from my deck to my Graveyard but by the effect of " Dimensional Fissure" the card is send to the remove from play. so i choose "Obolisk the tormentor" now i place 3 cards face down and end my turnTrance: Draw! i place 1 card face down and end my turn.Sho: Draw! i play once more "Foolish Buiral" and now i choose " Slifer The Sky Dragon". and now i will set one monster on the field( Magican of Faith) i end my turn.Trance : Draw ! i special summon 1 of my Cyber Dragons to the field. no i play Future Fusion and i choose Cyber Twin Dragon . now i use the spell card Overload Fusion and i summon Cyber Twin Dragon to the Field. now i play Limiter Removal to make my Monster's ATK points go to 5600. i ATK . Sho: i play the trap card return from the diffrenet dimenstion to special summon slifer and obolisk.... i use obolisks effect so i say by by to slifer and my face down to send all your monsters to the graveyard.Trance : ah no way.Sho : and by the effect of Limiter Removal you loose 2800 life points.and now by god cards go back to the remove from play.Sho: Draw! i play the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon to destory your face down. and i summon Dark Blade to the field and i attack and win the Duel.Trance : no way how did he do that. Duel end winner : Sho. in the time of the story when someone has won a duel the loose had to give the winner a any thing a card worthy of the winners best cards. Sho was a good person and didnt need the card so he just walked away. Later the day Trance had this wierd feeling in his head. END !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 2 Desperation of the CYBER. The night after the duel with Sho, Trance had a dream about a Monster that he has only saw in books and pictures. he saw that Monster on a hill screaming with anger. the monster in his dream was "Jinzo". at Morning he woke up got and got to school. At school Trance saw a poster on the school gate that said " Duel Tornament a week from today" while looking at the poster Trance saw Sho looking at him in a funny look. after 1 week of nonstop trainning both Trance and Sho were standing in the gates to the tornament. this was for both the first time they will be on a tornament that will go on TV live. Trance and Sho looked at each other noded with thier heads and went in. They went to the Board that showed all the duels of the tornament.Trance had his duel before Sho. his duel was against a well known girl named RUKA. She was a normal girl. execpt here madness about pyro Monsters. she had the same deck for 4 years.Trance was scared. he did not want to duel here but Sho put his hand on Trance's sholder and said "i know you can win ".As both Trance and Ruka came in the duel zone. with the Duel Disks on thier hand. the narrator said some bios about both people. and then he said Duel!!! Duel Ruka: i will start. Draw! i summon "volcanic Blaster " in attack mode. and then i play 1 card face down.Trance: Draw !. Hmmm this is gonna be fast. i special summon "Cyber Dragon" and then i summon "Hunter Dragon" and no i attack with Cyber Dragon"Ruka: no you dont. i play the trap card "Widespread Ruin" so you Cyber Dragon is send to the graveyard.Trance: so i attack with Hunter Dragon. and now you got 500 points of damage.Ruka : you activated my Monster's effect. so i choose "Volcanic Rocket"and i put him on the top of my Deck.Ruka :Draw ! i summon Volcanic Rocket and i use its effect so add to my hand Blaze Accelerator and i activate it and know by discarding 1 pyro type monster with 500 ATK points or less i can destory one monster on your side of the field. so i discard Volcanic Shell and i destory you Hunter Dragon.Trance : Draw! i play Premature Burial. so by paying 800 points say hello to Hunter Dragon. but not for so long . I tribute him to summon Cyber Dragon.and i attack you monster. you got 200 points of damage. i set one card face down.Ruka : Draw! i play "Tri-Blaze Accelerator" and then set on Monster on the the field("volcanic Blaster ) and place one card face down.Trance: Draw! Cyber Dragon Attack. he is destoryied and you loose 900 life points. Ruka : i activated my cards effect. and i choose "Volcanic Doomfire" and put it on the top of my deck.Ruka : Draw! i put one card face down. and by sending "Tri-Blaze Accelerator" to the graveyard i can summon "Volcanic Doomfire" . and then i send it to the graveyard to summon "Volcanic Hammerer" and i attack you cyber dragon and you lost 300 life pointsTrance: Draw! i play Lightning Vortex so you Monster is destoryied.Ruka: i play a trap Call Of The Haunted so summon "Volcanic Doomfire". Trance : i play Pot Of Greed. so i darw 2 cards. I play too a trap i play Call Of The Haunted so say hello to Cyber Dragon. but wait thier is more i tribute him to summon my new monster "Jinzo" and by his effect i can negate the effect of you call of the haunted and send your monster back to th graveyard and with out no monsters on your side of the field i attack. End Duel Winner:Trance As the duel ended Trance looked to the at the people looking at the duel. thier was no noise what so ever. after 5 minutes or while Trance was leaving the duel field he heard a people screaming cheering. he looked up and he heard the people say "Trance rockes" "Trance is the Man" and more stuff like that. after he left the duel field he saw Sho waiting for him at the corner of the room. Trance came over and started to talk about the duel. they both were very happy. but all of a sudden Sho got serious and asked him were he got Jinzo from. Trance that did not know alot about rare cards asked him why is he asking. Sho answered and said to him that Jinzo is a rare card that is priceless and very powerfull that thier is no way that someone who duel in a place like this can get one. As Sho was talking Tranced looking into Sho's eyes and he saw a Yellow sparkle. after a while Sho's eyes returned to normal. Sho went to the see you is he dueling against and he saw a the name the name was "Ichi Moto". on the next chapter of YU-GI-OH The Underworld of Heaven. Ichi Moto deck: yugi moto's old deck.Favoret card: Dark Magican Of Chaos Shodeck: God cards Deck.Favoret card: The Winged Dragon Of RA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Don't BUMP a thread about 3-4 hours old plus is this the first or second episode? If it is the second episode where is the first episode? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 i will add a link to it. and i Bumped cuz i have opend this post in a time that no one was online so i bumped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 work on your gramma mate, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 ya i know i have grammer problems and i said it in evey set of cards i made here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 Not bad, 8/10!!^_^BYE!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 thx man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 Well, I'll wait for the next chapter and now I know you have gramma problems I might increase my rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 6/10 (So Far). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 You don't know the effect of the cards and horrible OCG so I give you a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 thier is no OCG this is a fun fic so am ignoring your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 I meant grammar,capitalization,spelling but I just did that as a short. Anyway you don't know carf effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 mmm and why is that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 The effect of Limiter Removal, "at the end of the turn all monsters affected by this effect are destroyed." No losing LP. That's Powerbond. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 no explaination on card effects! (I don't think everyone knows everything about a children's card game) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 well if they have a problem they can look the card up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonkidskinner Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 what the ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 no explaination on card effects! (I don't think everyone knows everything about a children's card game)I know most of the cards by heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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