EliminateHRN Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 This is my newest Fan-Fic and it will have old and new characters. Here is the plot, characters, blah blah blah PLOT: Neo Domino City has been a peaceful place but now there is a new "King", Jack Atlus. And he trying to find something or someone. Now he and Yusei Fudo have become big rivals and it is time for them to meet again. But what does Jack Atlus have up his sleeve this time? And will Yusei and his gang beable to get back a stolen card? [spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Protagonists]Name: Kyle SaturnAge: 18Deck Theme: Forbidden MonstersSignature Card: ???D-Wheel: Red with blue trim Name: Yusei FudoAge: 18Deck Theme: Tuner/SynchroSignature Card: Stardust DragonD-Wheel: Dark red Name: Jack AtlusAge: 18-19Deck Theme: DaemonSignature Card: Red Daemon's DragonD-Wheel: Silver and wheel like Name: Aaron ZareAge: 18-19Deck Theme: ???Signature Card: ???D-Wheel: Blue with gold trim [spoiler=Antagonists]Name: Aki IzayoiAge: 17-18Deck Theme: Possibly Psychic-Type MonstersSignature Card: ???D-Wheel: ??? Name: Ronald AlureAge: 17Deck Theme: Lightning GuardiansSignature Card: ???D-Wheel: Green Name: Helix KneelAge: 20Deck Theme: FairySignature Card: ???D-Wheel: Pink Name: Tetsu UshioAge: 28Deck Theme: PersuitSignature Card: Goyou GuardianD-Wheel: Security like [spoiler=Other]Name: Will VenAge: 23Deck Theme: FiendSignature Card: ???D-Wheel: Black with blue trim [spoiler=Character's Decklists]Coming Soon I'll add more characters as the story prgresses :D Opening ThemeEpisode 001 - Opening Duel ???: So, Yusei how are you. A young duelist looked over and saw a friend of his came over. The boy had spikey red hair and a blueish colored jacket. Yusei: Fine. Kyle: Well I'm going to ride out into the city to you know. You wanna come? Yusei looked at him and started walking. Yusei: Sure. They found there motobikes and started them. They took off and took out into the city.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~???: So Aaron, when do you think we will see them again. Aaron: I think it will be pretty soon, Jack.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Yusei and Kyle was riding around the city. They slide past a corner. Kyle: Wow that was awesome right, Yusei. Yusei didn't answer. They jumped off a side of a bridge. It was nightime and not many people was out. They stopped. Kyle: I'm going to go my own way. I'll see ya later. Yusei looked at him take off then looked up into the moon.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kyle came up on a highway which no one was on. He stopped as he heard something. He listened closely. It sounded like another motorbike. It was probally Yusei following him. He got back on until a silver wheel like thing flew past him. Kyle looked up with dust all around. It was Jack Atlus. Kyle: Long time no see, Jack. He got off aswell as Jack. They looked at each other. Jack: Yes it has been a long time. How's Yusei? Kyle: Where is the card? Jack smiled. Jack: I don’t have a card of yours. Kyle: I meanYusei’s. Jack smiled and took a card out of his deck. Jack: You mean this card. He turned the card around. It was stardust Dragon. Kyle: Yes! Jack got back on his motorbike and started it. Jack: Going to have to come get it. He took off and Kyle followed. They stopped in a stadium type place. Jack: This is my stadium where I duel. It was silver and blue and oval shaped. Jack: How about this? If you win the duel I’ll give you Stardust Dragon and 3 other cards for you? Kyle: Fine, I'm up for any challenge. They activated Speed World and it started. DUEL Jack: I draw. Then I set 1 face-down and then I summon Mad Archfiend in ATK Mode. End! Kyle: I draw. Now I play Forbidden Area so now I place it in the Forbidden Zone. Now I summon Hidden Daemon's Knight in ATK Mode now when he is Summoned I can add 1 card in my Deck to my hand so I will. I set 1 card to end.[spoiler=Card Used] Jack: I draw. Now Mad Archfiend attack his Hidden Daemon's Knight. As Mad Archfiend started to attack Kyle activated his face-down. Kyle: I activate to negate your attack. Jack: Okay then I set 1 card and end. Kyle: I draw. I play Forgotten Trap so I place it in the Forbidden Zone. Now I Forbidden Summon Hidden Daemon's Knight and place it in the Forbidden Zone with the effect of Forbidden Area. Now I activate his effect so we both destroy a monster but I don't have one except this one but it can't destroy it so you only have to destroy one. Now I summon Curse Green Warrior in DEF Mode and I won't use his effect. So I End![spoiler=Card Used] Jack: I draw. Now I play to fuse and to Fusion Summon . Now I end. Kyle looked up at it. Jack started to laugh. to be continued..................... Hope you like it and it may be short but it will get longer :P:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 nice fan fic but i can't really base stuf about the character because i've not seen 5d's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Than ks and look it up on Youtube but anyway I'll have episode 2 up tonight ot tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Guys sorry for DP but I'll have episode 2 up tomorrow (I had a long day today) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 I haven't heard much about 5d. Very nice fan fic. I like how you set out the duels. Cheack out my fan fic, sometime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Thanks and I'll get episdoe 2 up tomorrow plus I'll check it out as well :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I have added new character in Antagonists P.S. Sorry I can't get the episode done it will be done either tonight or tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 Thanks should have episode 2 up tonight :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chillkillah #2 Posted May 5, 2008 Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 cool 10/10 for the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 Thanks again look at my last post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Guys I'll try to get episode 2 up tomorrow I kinda got behind on stuff so it will be up tomorrow or the next so sorry for the wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 nice...but still...kinda off on the story...i don't watch 5D...but great start... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 I know it ain't great but I'll add episode 2 tomorrow or next but thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Guys I will add episode 2 (hopefully) tonight (this post is acted as a BUMP Post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Guys sorry for TP but I won't make any more because I'm busy with some new stuff (including a new fan-fic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 oh, hope your fan fic will be as succesful as this one. Good luck with your new fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 oh' date=' hope your fan fic will be as succesful as this one. Good luck with your new fan fic[/quote'] Thanks and I really didn't know how to lay the 2nd episode out but still :D anyway thanks I think it will be my best and biggest fan-fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 How many fan-fics are you going to write? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 How many fan-fics are you going to write? ^_^ This will be the last one I just got writers block on this one and wanted to make my biggest one yet PLUS I'm making a forum for this fan-fic (actually more like a fansite really) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Can you give me the site when your done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Can you give me the site when your done Sure I would love to :P now let this die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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