NesteaEE Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 These Are my first cards I ever created on YCmaker, The images I give credits to: http://pamansazz.deviantart.com/If they suck, please don't give really bad comments just tell me what i can improve on to make my cards better. thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card King 08 Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 hey your dragons are nice, but your ocg is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Your images are overused, and the OCG is rancid. Your cards are EXTREMELY overpowered and are a shame to look at. Post these in the "other cards" forum. I few of your Card Grammar issues are: Summoned - Gets CappedSacrafice - Rancid OCG... Use : TributeLife Points - Gets CappedDARK - Gets completely capitalized.Graveyard - Gets Capped Your Re-done OCG is: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 LIGHT/DARK on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, you may pay 800 Life Points to send all DARK/LIGHT monsters on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points so this card can attack twice." That is COMPLETELY OVERPOWERED. 0/10 = EPIC FAIL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NesteaEE Posted May 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 thanks uh.. sorry becuz im new to YCmaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Im at least happy you followed the credit rules, which most new members miss completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 as stated, beautiful pics, and very, very bad ocg.. um try this: Danphyre the Dark Dragon: This card cannot be Tribute Summoned except by offering 2 DARK monsters as tributes. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, flip all face-down Defense Position monsters on your opponent's side of the field face-up (Flip Effects are not activated at this time). If there are any non-DARK monsters, destroy them immediately. Ekieno the Light Dragon: This card cannot be Tribute Summoned except by offering 2 LIGHT monsters as tributes. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can pay 800 Life Points to destroy all face-up DARK monsters on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn by paying 1000 Life Points, until the end of this turn, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. also, ur cards are overpowered. for Danphyre, u need to specify what happens to flip effect monsters if they are not dark monsters. second of all, u should increase the LP needed to activate Ekieno's effect or adding another requirement other than paying LPs. the light is too powerful and would pwn the dark monster (probably what u were aiming at.) glad to welcome u to YCM. enjoy ur stay here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Meh.. Sorry for getting mad. I got frustfurated. I apologize, but I change my rating to a not rate/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
optimistic mnm Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Good pics, but overpowered and there are some OCG problems. Nice job giving credits to the people that made the pictures. I will give you a 4/10. Those are pretty good first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugioh rox Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 overpowered and bad OCG but good first card 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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