Trying to bring back Dark Magician cards.

[Firestarter7200]

As the title says, I'm trying to bring back the archetype of Dark Magician cards. I'm sure some of these are a bit overpowered, and it was hard to word some of them the way I wanted to, so any feedback is appreciated.

Don't be too rough, this is my first foray into creating cards :).

 

None of the images used in these cards are mine nor do I take any credit for them.

 

 

This can cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand or deck by tributing a "Dark Magician" you control when it destroys an opponent's monster in battle. This card's name is treated as "Dark Magician" when it is face up on the field or in your graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 card in your hand to the graveyard to remove 1 spell card in your graveyard from the game. If you do this, activate that spell card's effect during your next turn's main phase. This card cannot attack on the turn it is Special Summoned.

 

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This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each "Dark Magician" in either player's graveyard. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can select one Spell Card in your deck and remove it from the game, then during your next Standby Phase, add the removed Spell Card to your hand if this card is still face up on the field.

 

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This card's type is also treated as Spellcaster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing one "Dark Magician Knight" you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field and activated the appropriate effect based on what was destroyed:

Monster- This card cannot attack during the battle phase.

Spell- Draw 1 card

Trap- Deal 1000 points of damage to your opponent's life points.

 

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Image found at:

http://photobucket.com/image/dark%20magician%20girl/Navy_SEAL_Danee/Dark%20Magician%20Girl/DarkMagicianGirl_33.jpg?o=232

 

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[Machovict]

I really like these cards. Everything appears to be fair and balanced. 9/10

[animetor07]

some ocg errors. has the ocg ever used "bypass" in effects?

[Firestarter7200]

some ocg errors. has the ocg ever used "bypass" in effects?

 

Yeah I didn't really know how to word that. I was going for the way that Destiny Hero- Diamond Dude works, he's the only card that can, in a way, bypass costs, and I wanted to make sure the activation requirements existed when the card got activated and that it actually hit the field so you couldn't just play some crazy overpowered random card like Ojama Delta Hurricane and end up blowing up everything your opponent owns....confusing business X_x

[animetor07]

"Once per turn, you do not have to pay Life Points to activate the effect of a Spell Card."

i'm not too sure if this fits but hope it helps.

[Firestarter7200]

I took another stab at it. It's still not perfect, but it's more OCG...able.

[animetor07]

i forgot to mention, for starters, you have great ocg usage. if u keep at it, im sure u can come up with a really sweet set.. anyways back to the topic.. ahh i can't see its effect anymore, mind posting it up so we can see?

[Firestarter7200]

It's in the spoiler

[animetor07]

much better. i like that effect and it fits for DM. 9.5/10

[Wyhe]

they are rather powerful,but still okay.BTW,can you seriously post the effect of Retrained Dark Magician? (the effect is too tiny & some people like me are myopic,I ain't caring if you're not)

[animetor07]

It's in the spoiler

lol, i asked it too but heres ur answer

[Chaos Impact™]

nice idea they have been lacking some decent support cards

[Card King 08]

I WAS HOPING FOR A CHANCE TO SEE A REALLY GOOD DARK MAGICIAN GIRL.

AWW

TRY AGAIN

[Encalade Shinamisu]

Like the idea, pretty good for a noob...

 

10/10

[Darkjagwar]

9/10

 

Pretty frickin' sweet. The whole advanced form makes the effects ok IMO. The spell cards have reasonable effects too.

 

however, u need better images. u should try to stay away from anime pics and pure black backgrounds don't please the tougher critics.

[silvericeman]

i like the cards being one fact is that i my self am tring to make a powerful spellcadter deck and have a "Dark Magican" in the deck