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Card Lore:

"When this card is Normal Summoned, remove from play 3 Zombie-type monsters from your Graveyard. While their are exactly 3 Zombie-type monsters removed from play, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, remove from play all cards in your Graveyard, then return the 3 Zombie-type monsters that were removed from play by this card's effect to your Graveyard."

 

Art by Noah-kh[/align]

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It's actually a very good card. Though, it's not your best, it is still very nice.

The effect is good, though, I have a feeling somthing like it has been done before, and maybe even a real card. But the artwork is fantastic, and the little additions to the effect go a long way.

Good work shini ^_^

8/10

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I have 'Dark Ruler Ha Des' in real life. That's a pretty good dead version :)

 

Yo' date=' TAG guy. I reported you. Just want to let you know.

 

And thanks EOTW. There was a secret reason why I made his attack so weak. I want to see if someone can find out.

 

And no this was no based off another card as far as I know. They reason why I named it Dead Ruler Ha Des is because he looks like a Dead Dark Ruler Ha Des.[/size']

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I have 'Dark Ruler Ha Des' in real life. That's a pretty good dead version :)

 

Yo' date=' TAG guy. I reported you. Just want to let you know.

 

And thanks EOTW. There was a secret reason why I made his attack so weak. I want to see if someone can find out.

 

And no this was no based off another card as far as I know. They reason why I named it Dead Ruler Ha Des is because he looks like a Dead Dark Ruler Ha Des.[/size']

 

Is his attack weak because... He's dead? :o

 

I don't know. Anyways, I'll have to compare your card to the one you talked about.

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Let me give you some constructive criticism.

 

First of all, "When this card is Normal Summoned, remove from play 3 Zombie-type monsters from your Graveyard. While their are exactly 3 Zombie-type monsters removed from play, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards."

"their" should be "there".

 

Second, Do you think having EXACTLY 3 Zombies in your Graveyard for it's effect to work is a little difficult to pull off? I've done it before, but people now a days have cards that manipulate the Graveyard so much that it's hard to maintain.

 

Third, shouldn't the card's ATK be the same as the original Ha Des? Think about it, you know the cards like Dragon Zombie, Clown Zombie, and such? If you compare them to their original forms, (Crawling Dragon, Crass Clown) their ATK remained the same. It's just a suggestion.

 

Other than that, the card is pretty much flawless. Good job.

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1. Why should it be their? Their is a possessive word, and Dead Ruler isn't possessing the cards. The effect is active while there are 3 Zombies removed from play.

 

2. The cards aren't in the Graveyard, they are removed from play. So that conversation is done.

 

3. Well having a 2450 ATK guy unaffected by Spell/Trap is a little powerful for cards nowadays? And since he's a Zombie theres a lot of combos and cards that he would work well with. I guess this point made would just be a clash of opinions that might sooner or later be a argument. So thanks for your opinion.

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1. Why should it be their? Their is a possessive word' date=' and Dead Ruler isn't possessing the cards. The effect is active while there are 3 Zombies removed from play.

 

2. The cards aren't in the Graveyard, they are removed from play. So that conversation is done.

 

3. Well having a 2450 ATK guy unaffected by Spell/Trap is a little powerful for cards nowadays? And since he's a Zombie theres a lot of combos and cards that he would work well with. I guess this point made would just be a clash of opinions that might sooner or later be a argument. So thanks for your opinion.

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1. Read your card. You put Their instead of There. Also, there is an extra space before the word too.

 

2. Sorry, I misread the card.

 

3. I suppose your right. I just wanted to help out a little that's all ^^

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