zeroyasha Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 This is my first cardI hope that card may like.Plese vote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NesteaEE Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 overpowered but its ok for your first card, the first card i made is also kinda overpowered so dunt worry, 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeroyasha Posted May 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 This is My new card GuilmonGrowlmonWarGrowlmonDukemonMatrix EvolutionDukemon CM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 Its an okay first try, even though the first card creepes me out slightly =/.As for guilmon, the flame claws killed it for me, as did the effect =S.Think of something more ocg then evolved. Like "At the end phase of your turn, add one Card with "Growlmon" in its name into your hand and shuffle." Except not that basic. AND! Too many type combo's. Seriously. Guilmon can be alot, but making it alot of things makes it worse =/. Stick to Earth/fire, with Dinosaur/Dragon/pyro. Not the whole package. ;D. Growlmon's slightly more tamed than Guilmon, but none the less, Can be improved =D. I'd prefer Growlmon to have about 2100 ATK, But thats just me. Id basic the types in this one to, since Demon Dragon doesn't suit the gentle Growlmon =S. As for its effect, Add "To your opponents life points" To the end of the first sentence, and once again, replace evolved with a more OCG "evolve style" effect. Add a full stop at the end, to. Uhh.. You kind of typed gallantmon for wargrowlmon. =P. I like Cyborg, but Odd school "machine" would look better IMO. 8 Stars would seem greater, as tribute cost is the same, whilist it makes it look more greater and mighty. Its effect is a mystery Of OCG Disgrace. I kind of get what your going for, but do what i do, and find a card with a similar effect, and simply tinge it slightly to suit your card. Again, add "To your opponents life points" To the end of this WITH A FULL STOP! Its attack and inflict, Btw. Good god im typing alot. Im just a nice reviewer ;D. Overall, id make this card 2800, as it is an ultimate level digi, and, most Yu-gi-oh Cards in their second last stage (The level ones) Had that kind of power. Also, Link it to gallantmon or Dukemon (?). For Gallantmon- I wouldn't advise breaking the digi-volve chain, unless "Matrix Revolution" involves wargrowlmon in some way. You can tell you've progressed here, With slightly better OCG and one (YAY!) relevant type. You forgot "To your opponents life points" For your ATK over DEF thing. Also, I like the effect with its backfire nature, But, It is a final stage card, and it could use something a little more pleasing. (or maybe its the faulty OCG putting me off of it =/). Maybe 3300 attack? 2800 Defense? I Have a strong dislike for stats matching Blue Eyes White Dragons. Also, FIX THE FREAKING TYPOS. How can you spell attack so badly? =[. TIP!: Try differing from the Fire digimon lines, as their the only ones you pretty much see around. Id kill to see someone make hawkmon well. Also, Add backrounds to your pics? Its kind of hard, but MS paint or Adobe Imagready can help. [You can get a 40 day trial on imagready, enough time to finish a set]. As white looks choppy ;D. Anyway. Its only an opinion, disagree if you want ;D. 5/10. Nice average cards, getting better. :D. -2sick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeroyasha Posted May 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 What Hawkmon??Armor Evolution or Digievolution??HawkmonAquilamonGatomonSilphymonAquilamon+GatomonThis card is also tratted as Earth.This card can only be summoned by removing from the play when they are on the field the material monster.When this card is destroyed you can special summon Aquilamon ang Gatom that are removed from play.This card can remove from the play a card for turn.ValkyrimonThis card is also tratted as Earth.this card can only be summoned by the effect of Digivice D-3.you must offer a tribute of 9 star or superior.This card gain 400 ATK and Def point for every Earth or Wind on the field.This card is unaffected by the effect of Spell or Trap card.Digivice D-3 That's the complete evolution series of Hawkmon As you wanted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaven 8 Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 lol nice for a first try but you called WarGrowlMon Gallantmon! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted May 2, 2008 Report Share Posted May 2, 2008 awww you used alt types instead of the regular ones. and the pics are decent and good for your first time just improve ooc and pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeroyasha Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 New card DORUmon DORUGamon DORUGreymon DORUGoramon Arrive of the Royal Knight AlphamonThis card can only be summoned by the effect of Arrive of the Royal Knight and tributating a DORUGreymon.When this card is special summon,change the enemy monster to attacck mode.This card can attacck all monster on enemy field.When this card is destroyed special summon a DORUmon or a Royal Knight that isn't Royal Knight:Alphamon. That's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Pretty good for a first try. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.