Apocolypse Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 These are two of my older cards that I've redone to make them work together as a team, the names are similar, so thought why not.I've made a couple of corrections. Epilogue.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Not bad but why did you put " " next to the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Corrected Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozotehpwns Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 "Razorclaw"When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully you can pay 1500 Life Points to special summon 1 ""Thunderclaw"" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard to your side of the Field.If there is a face-up ""Thunderclaw"" on your side of the field, once per turn you can remove the top card of your deck from play to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. "Thunderclaw"If this card was Summoned by the effect of ""Razorclaw"", Select one ""Razorclaw" on the field, as long as the selected card remains face-up on the field, once per turn you can remove the top card of your deck from play to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field. i give the cards 8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 These cards aren't bad! Just a few words of advice : ~Try adding a nice holo effect, to give your cards a bit more proffesionalism.~Try not to add quotations (") in a card name.~I can see some punctuation errors located in the effect of thunderclaw. You might want to fix that. Overall, great job! I'm really looking forward in seeing you make more cards! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Just a brainfart' date=' I guess.[/quote'] Done that already, :D 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I've made some corrections, satisfactory I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
making_cards_artist Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 it sounds good . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Cool. Balanced and good OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Nice cards :) My only criticism is that the effects are so similar... but it's not like I bursting with suggestion of what to change them to! :P Razorclaw / ThunderclawOCG: 8 / 10Realism: 8 / 10Balance: 9 / 10Effect: 6 / 10Spelling / Grammar: 9 / 10Image: 8 / 10Overall: 8.0 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Pretty good.The effect can be a lil better, and just a few other problems. But good work overall.7.4/10 I look forward to seeing more cards from you soon ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Thanks everyone for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 these guys are cool in a team up. but they are similar to the new lightlords that with their effect comes the downside of losing cards from your deck! pretty well balanced: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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