avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 simple card i came up with, not sure if ocg is right i tryed useing real cards to help me put the ocg togeather correctly its not the most interesting card ever but hey i think its interesting enough. [img]http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7493/61163rq9.jpg[/img] image: http://tehcrab.deviantart.com/art/Devour-My-Soul-16287642 edit: eddited again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 My goodness. I realize it was made in a "jiffy", but you still could've put more effort into making a card that worked with Level 1 cards and was more interesting. Hardly playable and the image is a bit too fractal. Good effort but you know you can do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 My goodness. I realize it was made in a "jiffy"' date=' but you still could've put more effort into making a card that worked with Level 1 cards and was more interesting. Hardly playable and the image is a bit too fractal. Good effort but you know you can do better.[/i'] its not level 1 normal support, see OF CORSE i was going for an idea that hasent been done before. you see at the end of the card it says monsters atk, which means you can pump him up and that will add to this. now i didnt just want to say level one because then people could abuse cards like relinquished chaos necromancer and even king of skull servents. but i suppose it is posible that i made it way to underpowered. so the question comes down to do you think it would be less underpowered if i said level 3 or lower normal monster. or more acurately do you think 3500 damage is a fair amount for a three card combo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 It seems to have been made increadibly quickly, like you just slaped stuff on there, and called it good. You should add more to it. I don't know anybody that uses a normal LV 1 monster in there deck. Also, effect LV 1's typicly are good cards, so, it's not a great card for strategy at all.Please do try and put more effort into your next card. Cheers,Yankeefan EDIT: Relinquished and such are banned.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 It seems to have been made increadibly quickly' date=' like you just slaped stuff on there, and called it good. You should add more to it. I don't know anybody that uses a normal LV 1 monster in there deck. Also, effect LV 1's typicly are good cards, so, it's not a great card for strategy at all.Please do try and put more effort into your next card. Cheers,Yankeefan[/quote'] of corse that would be true if it were level one normal monster support as i said and i dont really like to repeat myself i didnt want to make a WAY OVERPOWERED card when testing out the idea, of dealing damage equal to a monsters ATK not original ATK just ATK. so my question is do you think it would be less underpowered if i said level 3 or lower normal monster. or more acurately do you think 3500 damage is a fair amount for a three card combo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well, I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 trying making the card burn off the level 1 monster's original attack to make it more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well' date=' I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect.[/quote'] but what do i add that dosent make it completly overpowered, its ment as a combo card, its not ment to win the game for you its ment to set the path to victory... i cant really think of anything else i could add that would make it not overpowered, i mean if i changed it to even just level 4 it would be overpowered because of cards like gene warped then with megamorph that would be an instant 4000 damage. that is ALOT OF DAMAGE. so what do you think might make the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well' date=' I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect.[/quote'] but what do i add that dosent make it completly overpowered, its ment as a combo card, its not ment to win the game for you its ment to set the path to victory... i cant really think of anything else i could add that would make it not overpowered, i mean if i changed it to even just level 4 it would be overpowered because of cards like gene warped then with megamorph that would be an instant 4000 damage. that is ALOT OF DAMAGE. so what do you think might make the card.Ah, but that is what makes a good card maker ;)If you can add somthing to somthing like that, and still make it balanced, it's great. That is why I am recognized as a great card maker here. I have found ways to make long effects, that all can be game winning, become a balanced, good card.If you can do that, your great ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well' date=' I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect.[/quote'] but what do i add that dosent make it completly overpowered, its ment as a combo card, its not ment to win the game for you its ment to set the path to victory... i cant really think of anything else i could add that would make it not overpowered, i mean if i changed it to even just level 4 it would be overpowered because of cards like gene warped then with megamorph that would be an instant 4000 damage. that is ALOT OF DAMAGE. so what do you think might make the card.Ah, but that is what makes a good card maker ;)If you can add somthing to somthing like that, and still make it balanced, it's great. That is why I am recognized as a great card maker here. I have found ways to make long effects, that all can be game winning, become a balanced, good card.If you can do that, your great ^_^ yes, if you can make a card with lots of effects and still make it ballenced then you could be considered a great cardmaker. but what about the simple cards? cards with effects that most people ignore or just take for granted. do you think the person who made smashing ground or fissure or mystical space typhoon was not a good cardmaker because the cards are simple? to often on this forum do people make cards with HUGE effects that they actually have to POST THE EFFECT BELOW so people can read it. what happend to simple cards? i issue you this challenge, make a card that is simple but has lots of potential. as for this card, i still think it could be to powerful because i might be missing somethin but im going to make it so its level 4 or lower normal mosnters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well' date=' I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect.[/quote'] but what do i add that dosent make it completly overpowered, its ment as a combo card, its not ment to win the game for you its ment to set the path to victory... i cant really think of anything else i could add that would make it not overpowered, i mean if i changed it to even just level 4 it would be overpowered because of cards like gene warped then with megamorph that would be an instant 4000 damage. that is ALOT OF DAMAGE. so what do you think might make the card.Ah, but that is what makes a good card maker ;)If you can add somthing to somthing like that, and still make it balanced, it's great. That is why I am recognized as a great card maker here. I have found ways to make long effects, that all can be game winning, become a balanced, good card.If you can do that, your great ^_^ yes, if you can make a card with lots of effects and still make it ballenced then you could be considered a great cardmaker. but what about the simple cards? cards with effects that most people ignore or just take for granted. do you think the person who made smashing ground or fissure or mystical space typhoon was not a good cardmaker because the cards are simple? to often on this forum do people make cards with HUGE effects that they actually have to POST THE EFFECT BELOW so people can read it. what happend to simple cards? i issue you this challenge, make a card that is simple but has lots of potential. as for this card, i still think it could be to powerful because i might be missing somethin but im going to make it so its level 4 or lower normal mosnters. Ah, I see your argument. I know that making simple cards is not a bad thing, and it does not mean it should get a low rate, but we are on ycm. We wanna see originality, and big effects. As selfish as stupid as that sounds, thats how it is. we are not working for konami, so, it is up to public opinion on what a person should do when they make a card I guess. I'm not asking for you to make a huge, relinquished text size effect, i'm asking for somthing like a card with 2 effects or somthing. i'm shure you have somthing cooking up there in your head that you can use ;)As for your challange, I have made many simple cards with potential. I just have mixed 2 small effects that I had in my head. And it's still a tiny effect, but good effect. All you need is just to add a clincher to the effect, but still make it have a balancing effect.I do enjoy these, friendly debates ^_^ EDIT:The new card has inflict spelled wrong. I know what you can do however ^_^What you can do is make is deal half the original ATK of the monster. OR, you can make it stay the same, but give a requierment to play it, such as 500 lp or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Well' date=' I think that Lv 3 or lower is better. But you still need to add more to the effect.[/quote'] but what do i add that dosent make it completly overpowered, its ment as a combo card, its not ment to win the game for you its ment to set the path to victory... i cant really think of anything else i could add that would make it not overpowered, i mean if i changed it to even just level 4 it would be overpowered because of cards like gene warped then with megamorph that would be an instant 4000 damage. that is ALOT OF DAMAGE. so what do you think might make the card.Ah, but that is what makes a good card maker ;)If you can add somthing to somthing like that, and still make it balanced, it's great. That is why I am recognized as a great card maker here. I have found ways to make long effects, that all can be game winning, become a balanced, good card.If you can do that, your great ^_^ yes, if you can make a card with lots of effects and still make it ballenced then you could be considered a great cardmaker. but what about the simple cards? cards with effects that most people ignore or just take for granted. do you think the person who made smashing ground or fissure or mystical space typhoon was not a good cardmaker because the cards are simple? to often on this forum do people make cards with HUGE effects that they actually have to POST THE EFFECT BELOW so people can read it. what happend to simple cards? i issue you this challenge, make a card that is simple but has lots of potential. as for this card, i still think it could be to powerful because i might be missing somethin but im going to make it so its level 4 or lower normal mosnters. Ah, I see your argument. I know that making simple cards is not a bad thing, and it does not mean it should get a low rate, but we are on ycm. We wanna see originality, and big effects. As selfish as stupid as that sounds, thats how it is. we are not working for konami, so, it is up to public opinion on what a person should do when they make a card I guess. I'm not asking for you to make a huge, relinquished text size effect, i'm asking for somthing like a card with 2 effects or somthing. i'm shure you have somthing cooking up there in your head that you can use ;)As for your challange, I have made many simple cards with potential. I just have mixed 2 small effects that I had in my head. And it's still a tiny effect, but good effect. All you need is just to add a clincher to the effect, but still make it have a balancing effect.I do enjoy these, friendly debates ^_^ i think i will leave this card as a somewhat simple effect, and i understand that fact but hey i am planning on doing a set and sets need simple cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 trying making the card burn off the level 1 monster's original attack to make it more balanced. the uh point of the card is to make it so its NOT original attack that you are burning your opponent for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 Trying to make a set? Sweet.Though simple is good at times, most people want long stuff on every card. If you want an example, please look at my levia dragon cards. a 51 card set. I am logging off for tonight. Cheers to all, Yankeefan ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 lol simplistic to a fault. but what might help, make a follow-up card next time you make a simple card lol it will help the cards usage and cred ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 i dunkow i mean think about it as it is you could use megamorph with gene warped to do up to 4000 damage... i mean it could be over powered but i think its fine the way it is.... i suppose i could make a fallow up card but i just dont see somthing that could improve apon this card its pretty good the way it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 demotion i guess it would put that card to good use lol, so its alright... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted May 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 i actually thought of demotion and the strongest posobility with on demotion would be frostsaurus, i honestly think that though demotion would widen the range its not going to make this card broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 I though it would be Calling of the Weak? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 the name is fittinghe pic could be better, thoughand some ocg errors meh, its pretty basic......not that bad. and on the subject of the long effects... i like to keep it simple too. it doesn't need to be a wall of text to be original, balanced, good, versatile or powerful. why force the effects of 10 cards onto 1... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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