inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Old overpowered-ish cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 They are okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Dang I just got done posting those and you already read them all O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 They're okay I s'pose, but the title is super long... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Yeah my computer was acting up and it would've been in the middle of the post and everyone would have missed it, sorry bout that, I'll fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 They're okay. The wording and grammar needs a bit of work, though. Other than that, they're pretty good (except for that four-star "monster" with 2500 ATK points :P). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Yeah I made him for laughs and I needed another card for a contest. ( and do you know how powerful I would have had to make him without the straightjacket O_O) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seths Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 Alright in Mental link the name Darkshadow True Form should be capitalized in the beggining of each word and it should also be in quotations. In Darkshadow first form the '1st' should be spelt out.The name of Darkshadow- Bloodlust should have a space between the word Darkshadow and the hyphin(-), and the effect should be written " When this card is summoned, all monsters that don't have 'Darkshadow' in their name's ATK points are decreased by 700 points. In Darkshadow- Darkness the name should have a space between the word Darkshadow and the hyphin(-), and the effect should be 1 paragraph and battle step is 2 words. See the name rule of Bloodlust and Darkness for the correction of Lustwoman's name. See name rule of other monsters for coorrection of Tortureking's name. In the effect box of Darkshadow True Form it should also include the following sentence: "This monsteer can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, 'Restraints Off'. You must also offer 'Darkshadow First Form' and 2 other Fiend-Type monsters as a Tribute from the field or your hand." Also Darkshadow True Form's effect is overpowered drastically. The effect of Restraints Off should be written "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Darkshadow True Form". You must also offer Dark 'Shadow First Form' and 2 other Fiend-Type monsters as a Tribute from the field or your hand." They aren't that good I give them a 4.5/10, sorry but maybe you should study actual Yu-Gi-Oh cards to get a feeling of what they look like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted July 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 The problem is I didn''t know where to put the hyphon I don't see too many real yugioh cards. Some of the cards I made overpowered by purpose. ( besides I think some cards In the yugioh TCG happen to be overpowered) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seths Posted July 5, 2007 Report Share Posted July 5, 2007 No real life Yu-Gi-Oh card is overpowered, seeing as they're the base of which the overpower/underpower rule reigns, real Yu-Gi-Oh cards are made by profesionals, so I don't think there's any problem with one, I strongly advise you learn how cards are made so that you can have a better understanding of overpowered/underpowered, writting effects, and writting names. My rating still stands at a 4.5/10. EDIT: you put a quotation mark (") when you should put a secondary quote mark (') in the word don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blake 1002 Posted July 7, 2007 Report Share Posted July 7, 2007 make em bigger i cant see a thing man,lol.they r cool tho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remafiend Posted July 7, 2007 Report Share Posted July 7, 2007 I think they are cool = ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted July 7, 2007 Report Share Posted July 7, 2007 ooooo really nice cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inuyasha1a Posted September 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 I made these a long time ago, I know some are overpowered, I know the Ocg needs work. So dont complain about the original cards. I'm going to be adding to this set soon. I also know that some dont have good enough backgrounds so just shut up about it. If I am required to then I will change the way the original post was, so that it completely follows the new rules. I will follow the new rules with my NEW cards because it IS necessary. I will also be posting the new cards in the required upload format, and the old cards if you wish for me to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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