Twisted HERO arch type

[XXYYZZ]

 

Twisted HERO Destroyer

A Fusion Summon of this card can only be done with the above Materials.

When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy all other Effect Monsters on the field.

(2000/300)

Twisted HERO Conquer

2 Level 6 monsters

If this card destroys a monster by battle with an original ATK lower than the original ATK of this card and sends it to the GY: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, Special Summon that monster.

(2800/1700)

Twisted HERO Sacrifice

If this card is sent to the GY: Add 1 "Twisted HERO" monster from your Deck or GY to your hand.

(1900/1500)

 

Twisted HERO Dark Archer

Once per turn, target 1 monster your opponent controls, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that target's ATK.

(2200/1000)

Twisted HERO Cosmic Eye

1 "Twisted HERO" monster + 1 DARK monster

A Fusion Summon of this card can only be done with the above Materials. Your opponent cannot search their Deck.

(2500/600)

Twisted HERO Dark matter

After this card is removed from the field by your opponent's card, your opponent cannot Special Summon monsters until the end of their second turn.

(1700/1200)

Twisted HERO Minion 

When this card is summoned, summon another "Twisted HERO" monster from your graveyard, this monster can not be destroyed if there are any monsters in your grave

(2000/1500)

 

Twisted HERO Symbiotic 

Choose one card on the field, this cards ATK AND DEF become that of the chosen monster 

(0/0)

Twisted HERO Oberon

2 level 5 monsters 

Detach one overlay unit, choose three cards in your graveyard and shuffle them into your deck

(3000/2000)

 

Twisted HERO Scientist

When this card is special summoned, choose one card you control and one your opponent controls destroy them, and if you do choose two spell/trap cards from your deck and add them to your hand

(1600/1700)

Twisted HERO Veteran 

If a card you control would have been destroyed, send this card to the graveyard, and prevent that cards destruction, if you do draw one card

(300/500)

Twisted HERO Balanced

Once per turn send one card from your opponents hand to the graveyard, if you do this card gains 100 ATK and DEF

(1700/1200)

Twisted HERO Tyrant

2 level 7 monsters

If "Twisted HERO conquer" is one of this cards overlay units this card gains the following effects 

*detach one overlay unit and take one of your opponents cards from their hand and add it to your hand

*detach one overlay unit and chose on monster, make that monster one of this cards overlay units 

(4000/2500)

Twisted HERO Observation 

Once per turn, look at your opponents hand and choose one card to shuffle back in their deck

(1400/500)

Twisted HERO fracture 

1 "twisted hero" monster + one earth monster 

When this card is on the field, all of your opponents monsters ATK and DEF are halved 

(2500/2000)

"Beckoned to the lair"

Spell card

Choose one HERO monster and destroy it, when you do summon one "Twisted HERO" monster from your deck or graveyard

"No mercy"

Equip spell

Choose one "Twisted HERO" monster and equip it with this card, the equipped monster gains 1000 ATK, the monster must attack or this card is destroyed 

"Twisted Base"

Field spell

When this card is on the field "twisted HERO" cards cannot be destroyed, when this card is destroyed target one HERO monster, it cannot be destroyed for two turns

"Twisted revenge"

Quick play spell

Make one of your opponents monsters ATK and DEF zero

 

 

[Dokutah]

On 2/29/2020 at 3:56 AM, XXYYZZ said:

Twisted HERO Destroyer

A Fusion Summon of this card can only be done with the above Materials.

When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy all other Effect Monsters on the field.

You missing the Fusion Material

In fact you miss all trait other than stat in many of these. While all of them probably DARK Warrior, you need to place traits as complete as possible on each card even on new post as a habit

Quick fix:

Must be Fusion Summoned with the above Material. When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy all other Effect Monster on the field.

Kinda weak as per now, on your previous thread many commenter compare this to Black Rose Dragon which probably correct if not for the fact unless the material itself can provide contact fusion the relieance on Fusion Spell make this worse than rose. Especially with that abysmal stat

On 2/29/2020 at 3:56 AM, XXYYZZ said:

Twisted HERO Conquer

2 Level 6 monsters

If this card destroys a monster by battle with an original ATK lower than the original ATK of this card and sends it to the GY: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, Special Summon that monster.

(2800/1700)

weaker goyo guardian except for its stat, the Rank is also awkward to for Mali plays. This not gonna age well

On 2/29/2020 at 3:56 AM, XXYYZZ said:

Twisted HERO Sacrifice

If this card is sent to the GY: Add 1 "Twisted HERO" monster from your Deck or GY to your hand.

(1900/1500)

this actually kinda decent although the stat is a bit to high if its level 4 or lower. It can be use as discard fooder for other effect while provide bonuses. 

On 2/29/2020 at 3:56 AM, XXYYZZ said:

Twisted HERO Dark Archer

Once per turn, target 1 monster your opponent controls, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that target's ATK.

(2200/1000)

On 1 hand inflict potentially 2000+ damage for almost free with only SOPT is not really my cup of tea, but on the other hand its the only thing that it does. Assuming (again) this should be the level 6 to pair with Conquer based on that stat which rather weak for that level 

On 2/29/2020 at 3:56 AM, XXYYZZ said:

Twisted HERO Cosmic Eye

1 "Twisted HERO" monster + 1 DARK monster

A Fusion Summon of this card can only be done with the above Materials. Your opponent cannot search their Deck.

(2500/600)

Our famous Thunder Dragon Colossus copy, While this does weaker that it dont have the anti-destruction and that instant speed alternate summoning. Its still have things that can be abuse. First its a has better option than colossus in semi-generic material department. unlike colossus, this requiring any DARK as the generic material is goes like bread and butter with Super-Poly and jelly...i mean, good stuff warriors (which coincidentally happen to be mostly DARK, eh konami). And the anti search effect its still effectively oppresive as ever 

Quick Fix:

Must be Fusion Summoned with the above Material. Cards cannot be added from the Main Deck to your opponent's hand except by drawing them.

Well thats it for now, i will resume soon if i got the time

[XXYYZZ]

On 3/1/2020 at 10:17 AM, Dr. Jolly Glot the III said:

You missing the Fusion Material

In fact you miss all trait other than stat in many of these. While all of them probably DARK Warrior, you need to place traits as complete as possible on each card even on new post as a habit

Quick fix:

Must be Fusion Summoned with the above Material. When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy all other Effect Monster on the field.

Kinda weak as per now, on your previous thread many commenter compare this to Black Rose Dragon which probably correct if not for the fact unless the material itself can provide contact fusion the relieance on Fusion Spell make this worse than rose. Especially with that abysmal stat

weaker goyo guardian except for its stat, the Rank is also awkward to for Mali plays. This not gonna age well

this actually kinda decent although the stat is a bit to high if its level 4 or lower. It can be use as discard fooder for other effect while provide bonuses. 

On 1 hand inflict potentially 2000+ damage for almost free with only SOPT is not really my cup of tea, but on the other hand its the only thing that it does. Assuming (again) this should be the level 6 to pair with Conquer based on that stat which rather weak for that level 

Our famous Thunder Dragon Colossus copy, While this does weaker that it dont have the anti-destruction and that instant speed alternate summoning. Its still have things that can be abuse. First its a has better option than colossus in semi-generic material department. unlike colossus, this requiring any DARK as the generic material is goes like bread and butter with Super-Poly and jelly...i mean, good stuff warriors (which coincidentally happen to be mostly DARK, eh konami). And the anti search effect its still effectively oppresive as ever 

Quick Fix:

Must be Fusion Summoned with the above Material. Cards cannot be added from the Main Deck to your opponent's hand except by drawing them.

Well thats it for now, i will resume soon if i got the time

Thank you for the advice, I really appreciate it

[Dokutah]

Dark Matter: the anti special summon is supposedly quite scary. But its completely reliant on opponent action, thus easy to bypassed. Not really a threat nor help your plays 

(Fix) If this card is destroyed by opponent's card, either by battle or card effect: your opponent cannot special summon monsters until their next 2nd End Phase

Minion: stat a bit too high but finally, another decent monster. Revival on Summon is pretty good (sadly has potential of miss-timing). Immunity is quite ok-ish although can be tone down only work on archetype cards. The only thing that could make this bad is if this has Level beyond 4

(Fix) When this card is Summoned: you can Target 1 "Twisted HERO" Monster in your GY; Special Summon that Target. While there's "Twisted HERO" Monsters in your GY, This card cannot be Destroyed by battle or card effect

Symbiotic:there is a thing that this archetype lack in general, unifiying synergy. Cards pretty much do thing by themselves and only for themselves while not really contributing to your advantage nor gimmick. Symbiote here only have 1 effect that dont interact with the rest of deck with its only merits its to become fooder (which its does poorly) or battering ram (that also outclassed easily)

(fix) Target 1 Monster your opponent control: this card ATK and DEF become equal to that target ATK and DEF.

Oberon: effects is underwhelming. And again, the stat is too high 

Scientist: so far many of your card that consider broken on your previous post is mostly just lesser version of the irl good card with stat improvement. But this probably the closest we got to be actually unfair for the first time its a better and easier to summon Kuraz that doesnt even compensate opponent. Double search on top of popping any card is too much

Veteran: another decent card. decent protection, provide you with bonus advantage. The only thing i dont really like is that is too generic

(Fix) Whenever a "Twisted HERO" card would destroyed by battle or card effect: You can send this card from your hand to GY, instead. And if you do, Draw 1 card

Balance: i dont like this, anything that force your opponent to lose its hand even at random not only shouldnt be free and usable more than once its also cannot have a bonus effect on top of it 

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