my first cards/dbz

[Rainm]

my computer is messed up so its not letting me post my modifications or anything. its making me mad. so i am going to take a break and come back to it later.

[2sick4u]

Hm. Ive tried starting abit of a DBZ set myself ^^).

There a hell of alot of fun ;D.

Hm.

As for yours, well, i only read the goku line, and thats what ill review =D.

 

First, goku, Hm, for the master of the universe, i would of put around 1500, As it leads into a 2K super sayain quite nicely. But hey, just me. Also, Gokus description should contain a little more detail/better english. Saying something like you have.. has gotten rather mediocre ;D.

 

Hm. Well. Aside from you missing a D on field, and a period (full stop) here and there, Its okay for your first =).

BUT!. This part may seem stereotypical. But they are over powered, in the sense that super sayain 4 goku is indestructable. (even though he gets his stuff handed to him by shenron, and is weaker than gogeta, but ill let that go ^^). Because with a good amount of graceful charities and pot of greeds, plus ultimate offering, i could win a duel with pretty much ease, making him over powered as heck.

 

So!

My advice: Dull down the power, as it sky rockets way too soon. If you want to be original, make Super Sayain 4 goku something like " ATK/ ? Def/? EFFECT: The ATK/DEF of this card equals the amount of cards with "goku" in their name in the graveyard x600" or something. Piccys could be better, to :D.

 

Since i didn't say much nice.. i'll say this. Your cards are fun to look at, and not a waste like some over the forums, so..

-Since you had bad OCG, Some bad pics, and overpoweredness:

5/10.

Try to improve =D.

-2sick.

EDIT: Read the rest, must say, not bad, as the effects are in tune. Only problem is.. The pics. (isn't super sayian 1 gohans pic super sayain 2 gohan? just going by the hair style ;D).

Anyway.

Since their OCG was pretty good for a first set, and inventive to a level, i'll say:

7/10?

-2sick =]. (Sorry for the long post, i like to review =D).

[cyber dragon fusion]

are those your first cards cos they are awsome for a n00b weldone

[shadowsoldier]

I'd say ss2 - ss4 Goku is WAY overpowered. You may have tried to restrict his effect and balancing with how you normal summon them, but you didn't restrict special summoning at all, which opens up too many ways to get out any of the Goku cards without going through their normal route. Your enraged Gohan is also overpowered because it could destroy more than one monster as a rebound. I would just say to have the effect go off only if enraged Gohan is destroyed. Pic wise, They are all good except for ss1 Gohan. The picture you have is of ss2 Gohan, not ss1 Gohan. Your spell cards (except kamehameha) are also overpowered as it is free revival and destruction. You need to either add a cost or change up what the effect does.

Overall, I give these cards a 5.5/10 for reasons stated above. Please rework these cards.