storm dragon (realastic)

[making_cards_artist]

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[avariademon]

... oh k, though i understand what you mean by the effect, its still, not correct ocg, there is not creature type "light" unless your creating a new creature type, im assuming this is supposed to be a "deagon" type. other then that its a completly underpowered card, it has low attack for an 8 star, its effect is to situational to be good, and no one is going to run anti earth/sea serpent thats an 8 star monster. then again no ones going to run anti earth/sea serpent period. perhaps try an inovative effect something that hasent been done before. just as a suggestion.

[making_cards_artist]

okez

[Wyhe]

wrong OCG & by "wrong",I mean very extremely wrong

[avariademon]

i mean its a good card for a beginer most beginers start with something ridiculusly overpowered you should be proud of that at least just if you dont know how to word cards make sure you,

 

1. check existing cards to see if they have made an effect that is exactly like the one you want or is similar.

 

or

 

2. put it in the writing section of the forum and ask for help, though the writing section isnt always helpful

 

if these fail you go ahead and post it any way make sure you state that you need help with ocg. hope i helped even if it was only a little bit.

[Larxene]

the OCG is horrible...>.

[making_cards_artist]

thanks for the replies