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First Set Ever - Fallen Set


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Ok guys here is my new cards making a set. They are probably overpowered because I don't really know when they are too strong or too weak.

 

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Fall Of The Darkness

 

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Fallen Angel

 

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Fallen Evil Dragon

 

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Fallen Fate

 

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Fallen Goddess of Storms

 

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Fallen Hero

 

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Fallen Star

 

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i think you should crop the images to get rid the white borders...and imo you souldnt use images where there is a logo over them like fallen fate

 

Fall of the Darkness has OCG errors and looks like a photo which members of this site will basically flame you for lol

 

the wording is a bit off IMO it could say

 

Increase the ATK of all Fallen-type monsters by 1000 and increased their DEF by 500.

 

Fallen angel...i actually like the way you have worded this...i expect youll get flamed/spammed with posts like this

 

"OCG error"

 

i would make its ATK 2450

 

fallen dragon

 

again your gonna get "OCG" error on this one...i am loving how you put a bit of description that you would only see with normal monsters on your effect monster.

 

his atk is way to low for (how many stars is that?) it should be at least 2800

 

Fallen Fate:

 

this card is cool...it might be too broken...this is an example of a card with OCG errors that even i cant stomach...they make the effect too vague...

 

I SEE WHAT your trying to do with the card tho...but i think its too broken unless

 

1. you limit the ATK/DEF switch to your opponents monsters

2. you define how often you can do this per turn

3. imagine how abusive this would be with a needle worm on your side of the field or a morphing jar? its like a 1 turn deck out lolz...if you understand what im saying here youll understand the IMPORTANCE of #2.

 

fallen angel of the storms

love again the description with the effect but this is WAY underpowered...i would never waste two tributes for this. lower attack make it one trib or raise attack and IMO its still not worth it - see REAL two tributes such as DMOC and LaDD -

 

fallen hero

i like it make it 4 star and specifiy how many times per turn you can do this and whether or not you can just like trib scapegoat tokens to boost it

 

fallens star

i would let you choose between you gaining or your opponent gaining...then you could break reficule

 

im done gothic

 

dont get used to REAL r/f's like this...they are uncommon on this site IMO

 

get used to posts like

 

"6/10

OCG errors"

 

please check out my HULK SET, my card set, and the other cards i added today

 

here are the links

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=41013

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=41017

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=40706

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=33159

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