Bobinashoe Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Proper Burial----This card can only be activated whenever a Monster Card on your side of the field is removed from play. It is sent to the graveyard instead. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Rejuvenating Skeleton----If this card is equipped to a Monster with "Skull" in its name, increase the ATK of a Monster equipped with this card by 800. Whenever this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Monster with "Skull" in its name from your Graveyard in face-up Attack position. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Skull Rookie----As long as this card remains in your Graveyard, all face-up Level 1 Monsters gain 700 ATK. You can remove this card from play from your Graveyard in order to Special Summon "Skull Servant" or "King of the Skull Servants" in face-up Attack Position. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Circuit Virus----You can substitute this card for any 1 Fusion-Material Machine-Type Monster. Whenever the Fusion Monster that this card was used in a Fusion Summon with is removed from the field, return this card to your hand. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Booster Beatle----You can skip your Draw Phase in order to Special Summon this card from your hand to to the field in face-up Attack Position. During your opponents Battle Phase, you may discard and remove the top card of your deck from play to return this card to your hand. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Touto the Blasting Freeze----Both players can only attack with 1 Monster during there respective Battle Phases as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field. Your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards during your Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed by the effect of all Spell or Trap card, Your opponent returns all Spell and Trap cards on his field to his hand. *I do not in any way claim ownership to the image used in the card above. All rights to the original owner. Hitotsu-Me Giant Orc----"Hitotsu-Me Giant" + "Giant Orc"This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. At anytime during your turn, you may switch the battle positions of all Face-Up monsters on your side of the field once per turn. +++++++ I appreciate all the comments guys, i've got some new cards up. I'm still a noob at this, so i'd love any criticism or tips any of you would like to offer me. Thanks. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 simple, to the point and nice I'll give ya that..... Tip: Try to make an effect that makes a person think before playing it, and one that can change the way you play the game. But dont go so far as to turn it into "Rose Duel" or something lol ^_^.... Keep making great cards, and learning how to make more unique effects despite this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Thanks for the comment + advice. I know it's a very simple card; I wanted to start off with something basic, not the advanced kinds of cards you'd see here. Just more of an introduction to making cards. I've got quite a few ideas for more original effects and whatnot, i'll be making them soon.. thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Thanks for the comment + advice. I know it's a very simple card; I wanted to start off with something basic' date=' not the advanced kinds of cards you'd see here. Just more of an introduction to making cards. I've got quite a few ideas for more original effects and whatnot, i'll be making them soon.. thanks. :)[/quote'] well personally id like to see what you are capable of lol ^_^, would it be alright that you pm me your cards/effects before posting them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
szubs_kin Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Basic...Something Good to Start Of with...:DStart slowly ..As u Progress...Make it Better.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow27 Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Really nice card , boath as a begining card and , usefull also. Even though it's simple , imagine what can do when someone tryes to expell Your very Favorite monster from the game! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 For a first card, this is rather nice. :) Keep up the good work... ~ Lucas 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 simple good an no stupid cost that's a plus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 It is a very nice first card indeed ^_^ I hate to put a cloud over it, but according to section rules you need to post a disclaimer or artist credit/link to where you got the image on your card from. If you have questions, read the Realistic section rules (it's a stickied thread, so it's easy to find) and it'll tell you exactly what you need to do, or feel free to PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parallel Gunshot Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 for a first card its really goodgood but not overpowered effectno stupid cost for the effect ^_^and er... WHOOP!!first card rating - 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaven 8 Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 very good for 1st card. id like to see more of your work skaven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Thank you all for the comments, i'm working on more now - I'm glad ya'll liked it, didn't know it was gonna get this kinda reception. :D @ Darth Browarod: I know this; I have read all of the rules. It's just that there was no artist name from the image archive I retrieved it from, I looked all over the place for it but couldn't find it. I know it's a very old painting, and it's hard to come across the artists name - but I figured it didn't matter much, seeing as how very old paintings commonly don't have any sort of copyright or whatnot.. and it's not like i'm claiming it as my own. If I still require an artists name; i'll remove the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Thank you all for the comments' date=' i'm working on more now - I'm glad ya'll liked it, didn't know it was gonna get this kinda reception. :D @ Darth Browarod: I know this; I have read all of the rules. It's just that there was no artist name from the image archive I retrieved it from, I looked all over the place for it but couldn't find it. I know it's a very old painting, and it's hard to come across the artists name - but I figured it didn't matter much, seeing as how very old paintings commonly don't have any sort of copyright or whatnot.. and [b']it's not like i'm claiming it as my own[/b]. If I still require an artists name; i'll remove the image.In that case, just posting a simple disclaimer (similar to the sentence I bolded above) would be perfectly acceptable. This thread is fine, just remember this easy hint for any future posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Well, I have just edited in a disclaimer in my first post, sorry for all the trouble :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Well' date=' I have just edited in a disclaimer in my first post, sorry for all the trouble :D[/quote']Oh, it's no trouble at all. You are actually one of the better new members about the special rules for Realistic cards. P.S. Sorry if I sounded harsh at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 You weren't being harsh at all ^_^ Anyways.. Working on a lot of cards that i'll make a new topic for, seeing as how this topic will most likely be dead by the time there done. Thank you all for all the comments and advice, :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Good card, simple to the point, usefull. Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted May 7, 2008 Report Share Posted May 7, 2008 Very good for your first try. ^_^I think YCM has got a new talent in their hands.Its very good that you start from the beginning.Next time, use some more time in creating a more unique effect.I look forward to seeing more of your cards.Compared to the other cards i have seen new members make, this card is brilliant!O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Thanks for the comments.@Diedra: I see what you're saying, but i'm still getting used to all of this. An overly advanced card on my second or third try would turn out bad, in my opinion. I've just made some more that may be considered a tad bit more advanced, but compared to the rest of the cards on here.. not so much.+++++ Well. I've added new cards guys. Criticism and comments are always appreciated.. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destructor Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 That is one of the best threads i've seen in the last 5 minutes, good work! (9.8/10)BTW, the only cards i know with skull in it's name is "Skull Servant" and "King of the Skull Servants" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 That is one of the best threads i've seen in the last 5 minutes' date=' good work! (9.8/10)BTW, the only cards i know with skull in it's name is "Skull Servant" and "King of the Skull Servants"[/quote'] Wow, thank you so much. And by the way, there's lots of cards with Skull in the name. Take a look here, under "Page title matches". http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Search?search=Skull&go=1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redeux Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I'm assuming if someone had Macro Cosmos out (all cards would be removed from play), and someone played Proper Burial, which would cancel out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobinashoe Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I'm assuming if someone had Macro Cosmos out (all cards would be removed from play)' date=' and someone played Proper Burial, which would cancel out?[/quote'] I'd assume that if Macros Cosmos is already out, it'd negate the effect since it's first out - but don't take my word for it, i'm not 100% sure on that. By the way, I don't mind questions and whatnot. But could you at least post more then a question? :/ Originally Posted Yesterday 09:07 PM Bump! I merged the posts myself, so there would be no trouble amongst Moderators and whatnot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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