Shino Aburame Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Heh I had to make it! lol:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 After the word "summoned" add a comma.I'm not sure, but I don't think "Bug Counter" has to be in quotations.The word "Opponent's" has an apostraphe before the letter "s".Overall, amazing job!I think this is your best card so far! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 bug counter does need quotationsill post a revised version ^-^ When this card is summoned, place one "Bug Counter" on each of your opponent's monsters. Decrease the ATK and DEF of every monster with a "Bug Counter" on it. Any monster with a "Bug Counter" on it cannot declare an attack on this monster. This card is unaffected by your opponent's Trap cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 cool man nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DK NOBOYUKI Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 kool card needs ocg help but great start try and get a pic thats not from the anime but a good jpeg and you will be all set if you want i can make you a shino pic and send it to you but 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 It,s not the best pic of TS (timeskip) Shino out there, but otherwise i think the card's effect is balanced . but i think the defence is a little too high. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shino Aburame Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Shino's defense should be high because he uses his bugs as shields, his defence HAS to be high... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 No, I mean his defense is too high for the level he is. If you want it to stay that high you should make him level 7 or 8. Then it will be more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 kool card needs ocg help but great start try and get a pic thats not from the anime but a good jpeg and you will be all set if you want i can make you a shino pic and send it to you but 8.9/10 can u make pictures how what program do you use can u plz tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dor Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Very nice card. The name could be better thoughand was I the only one to notice that 3 lines in a row begin with "opponents monsters"? overall, very nice card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shino Aburame Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 No you weren't, and what else could the name be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 A bit of OCG errors but it's ok. I like the idea of the bug counter but Shippuden is spelled like this: Shippuuden and I think it should go before Shino Aburame not after. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shino Aburame Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 ok i will change that ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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