3 new cards come rate plz

[yugiohcardmaster5696]

 

 

 

I dont own artwork

[avariademon]

<,< well these cards are no where near overpowered or anything, really. card one? way overpowered, WAY WAY WAY overpowered, we're talking about a card that could potentialy, wait scratch that, would stop pretty much any deck but a dragon deck. the second card has bad ocg and is overpowered, it states attack a face down position.... its Face Down Defence position (not sure if position is cacpped, im not the most experienced in ocg i just know how its worded) it also states face up, a face up what? magic card, trap card? you need to state face up monster card.

 

over all its overpowered, if it was underpowered at least you would have made a card that was printable, but these cards are to powerful over all rating: 2/10

 

though im sure there are plenty of people who would dissagree with what im about to say, worry about your card first, THEN worry about ocg, make sure your card is ballenced make some practice cards and look at what is ballenced, try and keep things in mind when making a card. second if you are worried about ocg (which everyone and their uncle are going to tell you when you have bad ocg so if you dont want a bunch of people pointing out how you forgot to cap one word then you should probably keep two points in mind: one look at already existing cards to see abilities that are exactly the same or are like the abilities you want. and if you dont want to do that thats what the writen card part of the forum is for.