J-ace Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Heres my first crad hope you like it :DCredits to Onikaizer Deviantart: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber dragon fusion Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 OCG a bit wrong but apart from that it is good for a n00b weldone CDF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 OCG a bit wrong but apart from that it is good for a n00b weldone CDFnot n00b ;n00bs are persons who are stupid and spamishhe is a newb, a guy how is new and he is doing well And now to the topicits good for your first cardOCG a bit off, but you'l get better in timeand the pic is really goodjust remember to put a disclaimer of the pic ,if it isn't yours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber dragon fusion Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 soz but i will say this he will be good for the future don not spam and get banned plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-ace Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I forgot the credits, so i added them :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireball_dragon Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 This is good but to me it seems more like a field card.... Good job on your first card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 i think its really good ^-^keep it up8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 well.... to me this card is more like a field....... and it has the effect similar to The A. Forces..... but still kool.... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 good card for being new. but its kinda.... lackluster. when you make new cards, try and add a touch more originality to them, kay? keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 2 things: 1) Slight OCG error but that gets better over time2) unoriginal. that effect has been used at least 1.3 billion times Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domoking15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 This is my first card let me know if u like it plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heronick Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 WAY overpowed for a 4 star level monster. + You should credit the artwork maker the picture is ok some OCG mistakes like eneimes and pices etc. Take a better look at this card because it's your first card I will give you a 7+ which is pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domoking15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 This is my first card let me know if u like it plz why are you posting a card of yours in someone elses thread? that makes no sense! please make your own thread to post this in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domoking15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 idc what u say here is another copy of my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 domoking15, you are not getting it. this is J-ace's thread, so you talk about his cards here. if you want someone to comment about your cards, make a thread of your own. you have stolen the spotlight that was cast by this thread on j-ace. please make your own thread, complete with its own name, your card, and a disclaimer about the pic. currently you are lacking all three in the criteria set by the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domoking15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 well srry ..... i'm kinda new to this site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 @Domoking15:Even if you are new you should still read and obey the rules. Just make sure you read them thoroughly before you post again:D Anywho, J-Ace, There is an OCG error, but it is still very good for your first card. Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Awsome pic J-ace, and not bad for first card, keep creating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-ace Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Thanks everyone :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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