my first member card

[cyber dragon fusion]

here is my first member card!!!!

 

hope you like it and plz rate

 

 

CDF

[fireball_dragon]

Wow this card is great. pretty balanced, and would be great in a cyber dragon deck

9.5/10

[cyber dragon fusion]

thank you any more comments?

 

soz for the double post but plz can u comment (plz do not lock this cos it is before 24hours of double posting.)

[CinnamonStar]

Now first of all, even though your picture looks great, you're supposed to give credit to the artist/page you got it from or at least write a disclaimer.

The first thing about the effect which caught my attention was the "Special Summon the fusion monster" part. You should mention the name of the fusion monster you're talking about.

Also if I'm right, the last sentence should be: This monster gains 1000 ATK for every card in the Graveyard that has "Cyber" in its name.

Other than that, I think you put a nice effort into your first membercard, but you should work on your OCG.

[Chaos Demon]

Good card. Balanced and Good for a Cyber Dragon Deck. I'll look forward to seeing more cards from you.

[Rawlyn]

Other than the major OCG error of not specifying which fusion monster to summon, it's a cool card! Not too keen on the pic personally, but I think I'm alone there...

 

Cyber Dragon Fusion

• OCG: 6 / 10
  
• Realism: 8 / 10
  
• Balance: 9 / 10
  
• Effect: 9 / 10
  
• Spelling / grammar: 10 / 10
  
• Image: 4 / 10
  

Overall: 7.7 / 10

[cyber dragon fusion]

thank you and yes the final bit is wrong thank's for pointing it out in the circulation there is pic credit