growler7 Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 These are pretty good but the grammar needs a lot of work. Carry on the TV style it's quite effective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
growler7 Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 These are pretty good but the grammar needs a lot of work. Carry on the TV style it's quite effective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 thank you but i'm very busy at the moment can't tell you it's a suprise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 thank you but i'm very busy at the moment can't tell you it's a suprise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 This is one of the best fan fics i've read yet!10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 actually i'm stopping this fan fic but please do check out my brand new fan fic check out it's website www.freewebs.com/heroes-legacy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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