I´m back! 3 new card already!!

[heronick]

New Cards 2009!!!!

New card: Wicked Dimension

Art as usually from devianart.com!

 

Another new card: Sword of Heaven

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Again a new card:

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Old cards 2008!

Card artwork by : Jason Engle (L)

Card artwork by: Nicole Cardiff (L)

Artwork creator Gerald Blom

card art from devianart.com enjoy;)

Another card:) I think this card is pretty good art from devianart.com :)

The ritual spell card:D devianart.com :)

Art from devianart.com

Saverion the Knight Art from devianart.com by ~camilkuo

[Skaven 8]

i like it but give it an effect and it will be even better.

[Chaos Demon]

Nice! Try making his defence better if he's a guardian though. I'll look forward to seeing more cards from you.

[CinnamonStar]

This looks like a pretty good card, especially for a new member. It's nothing really special, though, and there are a few spelling mistakes, but the image is really good (I tend to use pictures from this guy, too^.^).

I don't think there's anything else I should add here, except a rating. Let's say... 8/10 because this is a good card for a beginner.

 

EDIT: I can understand the fact that you preferred to start off with a normal monster, but I hope to see some monster cards with an effect and of a similar quality from you soon^.^

[Yankee]

Hey guys my realistic card please rate:)

 

Card artwork by : Jason Engle (L)

 

1. Normal monster, nobody really cares alot for them on ycm. WE really want to see effect cards, because it shows your creativity.

2. 2000 ATK 4 star is a lil strong, and chaos demon, rasing the DEF would just make it more overpowerd.

 

Good though on crediting the artist.

 

Becuase it is normal, I cannot rate it.

Please do try to make an effect card.

 

I look forward to seeing you post again soon

 

Cheers,

Yankeefan

[CinnamonStar]

Did Raven say that?O.O She doesn't remember, but maybe Chaos Demon does....^.^

Anyway, you're welcome^.^

[Rawlyn]

Nice card! There's usually a lack of normal monsters being posted here, so it's good to see that people still care - especially as I often run a normal deck, and a 2000 ATK level 4 always comes in handy! :D

 

Only one thing - shouldn't it be "death itself" and not "dead itself"?

 

Guardian of the Closed Door

• Realism: 9 / 10
  
• Balance: 10 / 10
  
• Spelling: 9 / 10
  
• Image: 8 / 10
  

Overall: 9.0 / 10

[CinnamonStar]

That's what I meant when I mentionned the spelling mistakes. I didn't catch if you mean that the warrior is known as dead or if he represents death.

[HelioSpark]

A few spelling and ocg mistakes, but not bad overall:D 8/10

[Yankee]

OCG = Official Card Grammar

 

 

Good work' date=' it just has a few errors ^.^

Just cap all summoning conditions, so, it should be Special Summon.

Deck should be capped

Defence should be capped.

There are a few others, but thats enough for a good card.

Good work

 

7.1/10

 

 

 

Again a new card:) Artwork creator Gerald Blom

 

Good work on the effect man!

It's just a lil strong, and you have, yes, just a few errors

 

New effect:

"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the DEF of all WATER monsters by 700"

 

Good work man.

That is just a lil strong, otherwise, GOOD JOB!

 

7/10 ^.^

[Lord Ursus]

Chaos Demon, a guardian is something that defends something from taking it or come into it... etc. It doesn't need to have high DEF for doing that purpose, as it could still guard something by cutting down those who approach what its guarding.

 

And to you, heronick, normal monsters aren't very creative. The rest are good enough, but there are some OCG errors.

 

Not bad, but not good either. A.

[avariademon]

the gaurdian card is overpowered, the reason gene warped was ok was because there is not really good beast worrier support. but a 2000 ATK monster that can be rota'd to your hand and it has no down effect? can some one say just a bit to much? not to mention normals are bland. the only normals im interested in are level 1 normals with 2000 or more defence.

 

4/10

 

the second card is cool i could see some nice decks resulting in that it could really support level 1 normal decks. just a few errors a nice job

 

7.5/10

 

the last card is bland and uninteresting the only nice part about it i would say is it is a 2400 atk one sak warrior other then that it has a bland anti effect that no one will need. though i do like the fact that it is a fire type warrior i was considering making a fire warrior deck any how

 

5.5/10

[avariademon]

Wtf is "rota'd"?

And about the effect of my 3rd card, fire <- water the effect makes sense however your reply doesn't

And ur talking about deck's? I'm just making random cards these are FANTASY cards you will never use them in your deck.

Thanks for your reply anyhow I do not agree at some points

 

 

*sigh* benafit of the doubt. ROTA is the abrivation of a comonly used spell card called reinforcements of the army. which allows you to search your deck for a 4 star or lower warrior type monster. the highest ATK a monster has gotten that can be used with ROTA is goblin attack force, which is not the greatest of cards.

 

*sigh* again benafit of the doubt. look i never said it didnt make sence, what i said was it is BLAND and UNINTERESTING meaning no one would use it, i honestly think it would be better as a normal monster. anti cards are only good in one place, the side deck, and this card would never see that, WHY? because the anti has nothing to do with what people need in todays meta.

 

now im assuming you wish to know why i am refering to real decks, despite the obvious fact that these cards WILL never see print. it is simple, this is the realistic cards forum, there is one thing i always ask myself when i look at a card: what would it be like if this card was ever actualy printed. when i asked this question for the gaurdian card? i got a simple awnser abused in warrior tool box decks, the second card? good for decks that need quick defence, and the third card? the garbage no one would use it, save a few crazy people like me, and i would only use it for everything BUT its effect. its ok and i understand the fact that you are a newbie and you have just joined this forum. but if your going to post in the realistic card forum, there are going to be people who ask them selves as they glance over your cards. what would it be like if this ever saw print? IF you however still wish to make "random cards" then there is a perfectly good part of the forum that dosent take the cards a seriously as here, if you wish to make "random cards? please, go there.

[Rawlyn]

Some good points, but poorly made.

All that sighing just makes you sound arrogant - give it a rest.

[avariademon]

AH but arrogance is a vurtue.... NOTHING come on! im sighing because the awnsers to the questions feel.... well obvious to me.

[Rawlyn]

Arrogance isn't a virtue, but patience is. Try it the next time a newbie asks something that seems "obvious" to you.

[Wyhe]

If I were you,I would go make a non-vanilla. (also,a lv4 monster with much attack points are bound to have a catch)

[heronick]

Updated :) Added more cards

[Evil Hero Ant]

Hmm.. cool cards. Just slightly overpowered an some minor OCG errors.. but still good cards!

[avariademon]

Arrogance isn't a virtue' date=' but patience [i']is[/i]. Try it the next time a newbie asks something that seems "obvious" to you.

 

REALLY!?!? wow, patience is a virtue, THATS CATCHY you should turn that into a saying you know, I mean man patience is a virtue I have NEVER heard that before, and the best part about it IT IS A VIRTUE WOW. I mean really because stating arrogance is a virtue was not 1. A joke, and 2. A play on the original saying "patients is a virtue" and to be honest ill be as impatient and as patient as I want to be.

 

On a side note I find the arrogance comment quite amusing coming from you.

[heronick]

Avaria how about the effect of Dark Crusader Enrage and Guardian of the Closed Door. Are they O.K. now?

[alvarosv]

The Guardian should be called Aggressive Guardian of the Closed Door because of it's big attack. It's also a bit underpowered because with such a bad defense it shouldn't have that effect.

[avariademon]

Avaria how about the effect of Dark Crusader Enrage and Guardian of the Closed Door. Are they O.K. now?

 

sorry, i just posted that a forgot to rate i saw the cards, the gaurdian might be a bit underpowered now but i do like how you used spell counters as a down effect, i dont think i have seen that yet, maybe increase the limit to like 6 or something, but thats just an idea.

 

8/10

 

The dark crusaders effect might be a bit to powerful, but at the point in time I don’t see anything wrong with it, its no longer an anti effect so it could and probably would see use

 

7/10

 

Though the samurai card has effects that have costs and or are by chance the pay offs for some of them are a bit to much it’s a little over powered you might wish to reconsider exactly what they do im not seeing it being ridiculously overpowered or completely broken but that’s just me, perhaps some one else can see something wrong with it, just like I said re think the effects cause some of them are a bit much, like maybe just make it so its effect is pay a 1000 get 300 atk for each card your opponent controls, something like that.

 

6/10

 

Lost sord looks fine, but im not sure what you mean by the returning to the top of your deck effect, is that a if you delt 500 damage to your opponent (by whatever means) it is returned to the top of your deck? I think the ocg might need to be reworded

 

7/10

 

The ritual card looks fine the effect has a bit of a problem you spaced part of it just backspace there and it will be fine, also a very interesting effect.

 

7.5/10

[heronick]

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[Atomix]

Someone followed the rules, well done ^_^

 

- Atomix