boc15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/6914/60273vq6.jpgDesclaimer: All rights still reserved to photobucket and the member of www.photobucket.com who designed this image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 1. Overused pic2. Grammar/ocg errors3. Overpowerd. New wording on the effect:"Pay 1000 Life Points during every 1 of your Standby Phases (This is not optional). When this card destroyes a monster as a result of battle, increase your Life Points by half the original ATK of the destroyed card. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects." I think thats how it should be. But it's still very overpowerd... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I think you made a great effort with this card! My only comment, is that you need to improve on getting a more unique picture for your card, as well as thinking of a more balancing effect. I would also like to suggest that you should try and decrease this card's level by one, because I think that it's current level is a little high. Overall, great job! I'm really looking forward in seeing you make more cards! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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