Chaos Demon Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Please rate these, but don't be too harsh, I'm new. Oh, by the way my set of these cards are coming soon. I really don't know who made them, I just got them from Google Images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Please rate this' date=' but don't be too harsh, I'm new. [/quote'] If you're new you should ask people to be harsh so that you can see all your errors and become a whole, and better card maker. Correct OCG:"If this card in is your Graveyard during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 "Chaos Demon" to add this card to your hand. Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I would go with Forced Simplicity OCG correction as yours is bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Missing: Disclaimer or artist credit/link for the image used on your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Thanx for your help, I've edited it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Hero Ant Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Hmm.. quite an overused picture.. lol. But.. still, OK for a new member lol..Good Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Thanx, Elemental Hero Anthony. Since I am new I have not seen it before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Punksheep Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 The first card is a monster from the TCG: magic the gathering... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 What is TCG: magic the gathering? just wondering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I don't care what you say I'll just state my opininio. These cards are overpowered a lot!!!! Destroying one monster per turn is a really good effect even if it costs two tributes. Special Summoning a monster with 2600 attack and a good effect by only sacrificing a monster is overpwered. You should make 4 star or lower monsters and some trap cards but work on what I told you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 OK, alvarosv. what if I make it "Once only, destroy one monster on the field"? Whould that make it any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onemo Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 I like it except for the OCG errors (I tend to notice those). But, don't listen to anybody if you don't want to. You give yourself what you think you deserved and that's what counts. Also, if you posted these then you must have wanted them to be rated so there shouldn't be any real confusion as to why you might've gotten a low mark. But hey, that's just me here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 OK' date=' alvarosv. what if I make it "Once only, destroy one monster on the field"? Whould that make it any better?[/quote']It would be "Destroy a monster on the field.This effect may only be used once in the game." and yes that would make it a lot better. Sorry for being so harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 That's OK, alvarosv. I'll edit that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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