Draco Hunt Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Effect: This card can only be Equiped to 'Megaman EXE Beast Out: Falzar'.Double the Attack of the Equiped monster. During your Standby Phase, pay 500 Lifepoints to keep this card active. On your third Standby Phase send this card to the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Not a bad effort! I've found just a few mistakes though, so be sure to correct them : ~The word "Attack" should be abbreviated ; (ATK).~The word "Equipped" is spelled with two letter "p"'s.~The word "Graveyard" must have it's letter "G" capitalized.~When speaking of another card, be sure to but the words in direct quotations. Example : "Megaman EXE Beast Out : Falzar"~Try and work on the quality of the pictures you choose, to show a slight advance of proffesionalism. Overall, amazing job. I can really see all the efforts you used to make this card, so keep up the great work. If you need any more help, feel free to private message me. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Same as glastin ^_^... Keep great effort!! see other people work to see how they use grammar.. and its ''Life Points'' overall for u 7/10 -Frlf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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