Shadows70s Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 Chapter 1/Are you sure this will work?//Sure Atem, I know it will/"So it's decided right Atem?" Anzu said Shyly. "Umm...What did you just say?" Atem replied with confusion. "So it's decided right?" She repeated again. "I mean decided to do what?""The amusement park!" Anzu shouted in Atem's ear making sure he would hear it. "ARGH!" Atem shouted, silenting the whole class."Mr.Mutou! I said you could talk but not scream or shout!" The teacher shouted back.After school, Yugi prepared for the incoming day. ((Scene Change)) "Grandpa I'm home" The short teen shouted as he tossed his bag on the ground and ran upstairs to his room. /Atem I'll let YOU take over since it's your date/ "Oh my..." Atem said just after the transformation.((Scene change)) "I'm finally dating a person I like!" Anzu shouted out as she fell on the bed. "I think I'll start packing now" Next Day "Lets go Atem" the brunette said as she walked through the mouth of the amusement park."Atem?" "Oh, it's nothing, lets go" The tri-haired teen replied looking at a poster on aa glass wall. As the couple entered there destination they decided to go to the ferris wheel.'Why am I thinking about the poster more than Anzu? It's my biggest chance!' Atem thought in his head.WOOPA!Another ride's part fell out and hit the ferris wheel."AH!" Anzu screamed as she feel on Atem-her lips touching his. Anzu then pushed herself of and wiped her lips. "What was that?" Trying to focus on the destruction instead of the kiss. "Nothing really, we'll just get trapped here. The ferris wheel should take 5 minutes 'til it stops, now it won't stop" The teen stated calmly.'Won't stop!?' Anzu's heart thumped.____________________________Yep that's my first part :) it's my first fanfiction I ever made in my life.____________________________ Chapter 2 "Did you see that Atem?!" The Brunette cried out."Yes, indeed"A rope was thrown up and down beside our carrige only ours. Atem grabbed it and then instead of the couple going down, the person went up. When he reached the top he climbed in."Y-you are-!" The short haired girl gasped."Bakura!" Atem finished off. "Yes, it's me...and I chalange you, Yugi Muttou, to a Duel!" Pointing his fingers at Atems nose."And if I win?" Atem questioned."I'll let everyone off" Atem: Very well, I shall start off the duel. I'll draw *draws 1 card*. I'll now put Kuriboh in defensive position.Bakura: You fool! I'll use this magic card! Stop defense!Atem: Oh no!Bakura: You coward... I will now use my headless knight! (Atk-1450)Attack Kuriboh! 2850< >4000 Hahahaha!Atem: Hmmm... I now put one card face down, and then put Gamma The Magnet Warrior in attack position! ATTACK! 2850< >3950Bakura: I put one special card face down, defense.Atem: ATTACK! Bakura: You fool! (Millennium Shield (DEF-3000))Atem: Hmph! 1350< >3950Bakura: Now I put another card face down in defense position.Atem: I tribute Gamma to summon Gaia! Attack the face down card!Bakura: It was another millenium shield!Atem: ARGH! 1050< >3950Bakura: Now I use card destruction to destroy all my 3-fiend type monsters in my hand to summon Dark Necrofear!Atem: I use Raegeki.Bakura: Muhahahaha on D.N.? You LOSE! I use dark sanctuary!Atem: No way...Bakura: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHMUHAHAAAMHAHAHAHAHA!______________________________The threat begins! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Chapters are way too small!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 yeah way to samll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Millenium shields level is 5 or 6 and thats a fusion of the duel they had and a chapter from the manga. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GordieKat Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Pretty good for your first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Since the owner of this thread, Shadows70s, is now banned, this thread will be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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