Skuldur Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 wow faust is really strong, for an old man. Great chapter man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Like you have said,chapter 21 is very good.Faust has dueled in a way that's even better than expectations,you have improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Well, Well John. Nice to see you back again. Good luck with the rest of this Fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Very nice chapter ! Faust is kicking but alright!!! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Bump! Whats next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 BUMP STILL WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senron Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Great story dude keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 I wonder what's taking you so longWe want next chapter fast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted August 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Chapter 22 The Codex Master (Part 2) T:2800F:1000 Thomas's FieldMaster Plant 3100 ATK.Life force Faust's Field Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon 5000 ATK. Faust: So it's your turn only another to your demise.  Thomas: Ha thats not true (Thinking) hopefully thats not true. I play Man-Made Vine in attack mode! Man-Made Vine 1200 ATK.  Thomas: Now Play vine absorptions this spell give 1 plant monster the Ability to add one monsters attack points to it's own. But the monster that had it's attack points taken is sent to the Graveyard. so now Man-Made Plant is sent to the Graveyard and Master plant gains 1200 attack Points.  Master Plant 4300 ATK.  Faust: Thats still not enough to destroy my Dragon. Thomas: I know, that's why I sent Man-Made Vine to the graveyard cause when he sent to the grave one of your monster loses 1000 Attack points but I have to give up 2000 life-points.  Travis- Well thats kinda a bad deal right? Yukiko: No Because, He can destroy Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon! Good For you Thomas!!! Thomas- Thanks Yukiko! Master Plant 4300 ATK. Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon 4000 ATK.  Thomas- Now I'll attack that pain in the ass Dragon!!!  (Monster Destroyed).  F:700T:800 Thomas: Now you wanna give-up.  Faust: Are you kidding me? My Dragon shall live just wait and see.  Thomas: I end my turn.  Master Plant 3100 ATK.  Faust- I draw now I play pot of greed so I can Draw 2 cards. Now I play Monster reincarnation so now I can add 1 monster to my hand I choose Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon. Next I play a second Sinful Rune- Envy so now I summon a monster with the same level. I choose my Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon! Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon 5000 ATK. Travis- It's Back!!! Faust: Now I play Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your Life force Trap! Thomas- oh no!  Faust: Now My Dragon attack his Plant and end this duel! (monster Destroyed). F:0T:0 Faust: Why did I lose too.  Thomas: When my Plant is Destroyed you take 1/2 the damage I took. I took 1900 you took 950. So we both lose.  Faust: Damn you Duelist.  (Then they both faded into dust). Travis: ah man Thomas I'll miss ya man. Guys we gotta fight hard to beat all these Enemy's Gang: Right.  Travis: So we have to continue on guys lets go.  (Then they left the Large room) Meanwhile in Sigurdor lair... Sigurdor: Kaiser are you ready to be in battle. Kaiser: Yes Master I am ready. Sigurdor: Well then go get those little brats.  Kaiser: Yes sir. Back to the Gang... Travis: So where do we go from here?  Genny: We go to the next opponent.  ???: Which is right here  Yukiko: Professor Kaiser! Kaiser: Hello Students I Hope you are prepared to duel because I'm gonna teach ya a lesson in the art of duel.  Itsuki: I'll take you on. Genny: No I'll duel him I haven't dueled in a while so I deserve to. Kaiser: I'll take on Genny Why don't we start. Genny: Well I feel kinda rushed but Okay lets do this.  Genny & Kaiser : Duel! G:4000K:4000 Kaiser: Let me start with Gladiator Beast Andel in attack mode! Gladiator Beast Andel 1900 ATK.  Kaiser: Next I play Gladiator Beast Manica now one Gladiator Beast cannot be Destroyed in battle. Now I end my turn. Genny: Alright I play Celtic Guardian in attack mode! Celtic Guardian 1400 ATK. Genny: Now I play Malevolent Nuzzler this gives my monster 700 Attack points. I equip it to Celtic Guardian! Celtic Guardian 2100 ATK.  Genny: Now I'll attack your Gladiator Beast with Celtic Guardian! Kaiser: Well Remember my Gladiator Beast can't be destroyed because of Manica. Genny: I can still inflict life-point damage.  K:3800. Genny: I Now End my turn.  Kaiser: I draw Now I sacrifice my Andel to summon Gladiator Beast Alexander in attack mode. Gladiator Beast Alexander 2400 ATK. Kaiser: Now I'll attack your Celtic Guardian! (Monster Destroyed). G:3700. Genny: Oh Crap!  Kaiser: I now play a face-down and end my turn. Genny: Alright you want a battle you got one.  meanwhile... R.X: ugh why is this walk so long. I nearly out of energy. I...I uhh... (R.X then collapse to the ground). Wong has lost her soul now Thomas has lost his soul what else could happen?! Find out what will happen to Genny on the next episode of Yugioh GX: battles at duel Academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted August 6, 2008 Report Share Posted August 6, 2008 Nice chapter man, took you long enough (joke) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Nice chapter man' date=' took you long enough (joke) :)[/quote']Thanks and sorry for the wait I wanted to ask you if it was worth the wait? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 wonderful chapterboth my sent-in characters are duelling in this outthough Faust's defeat was not very dynamic,but still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 wonderful chapterboth my sent-in characters are duelling in this outthough Faust's defeat was not very dynamic' date='but still good[/quote']thanks WHYE' and your Fan fiction is great! Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Chapter 23 No Love for Kaiser G:3700K:3800 Kaiser's field gladiator beast Alexander 2400 ATK 1 face down card  Genny's field Nothing.  Genny: Alright I got no cards on my field but that cool cause you are still going down Kaiser. I summon Dark blade to the field. Dark Blade 1800 ATK. Genny: next I play Fusion Sword Murasame Blade. This wonderful sword here gives a Warrior type monster 800 big ones. Dark Blade 2600 ATK.  Genny: Now I'll attack you Alexander with Dark Slash! (Monster Destroyed) K:3600 Genny: Now I end with a face-down. kaiser: I draw and set one card and i end my turn.  Genny: Wow that was a fast turn. I now play Marauding Captain in attack mode. Marauding Captain 1200 ATK.  Genny: Now I can special summon from my hand a level 4 warrior thanks to Marauding Captain Special Ability. Now I play Mataza the Zapper in attack mode! Mataza the Zapper 1300 ATK. Genny:Now I'll attack your set card with Mataza the zapper! Kaiser: I'm sorry but your attack is not going through because I activate a face-down card called trap hole and I'll destroy your mataza! Genny: oh crud! (Monster destroyed). Genny: Well then I'll just attack you with dark blade!  Kaiser: that is also a no no because I activate another face down called magic cylinder so now I can redirect your attack back to you.  Genny: ahh!!! G:1100 kaiser: Are you done? Genny:nope... Attack Marauding captain. Kaiser: my monster is called Gladiator beast Hoplomus.  Gladiator beast Hoplomus 2100 DEF. G:200 Travis: Oh man he about to lose! Genny: I end my turn with 1 face-down . Kaiser: I draw and sacrifice my beast for gladiator beast Spartacus! Gladiator beast Spartacus 2200 ATK. Genny: I activate my face-down called shadow spell so now your monster can't attack and it loses 700 attack points also it's position can't be changed. Gladiator beast Spartacus 1500 ATK.  Kaiser: damn you Genny I end my turn.  Genny: Alright I draw. Awesome I play Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight in attack mode! Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight 2300 ATK. kaiser: How did you summon that it's a level 7 monster! Genny: if that monster is the only card in my hand I can normal summon it to the field.  Kaiser: lucky! Genny: Now I know you know what is coming attack him Gaia! (Monster Destroyed) K:2800 Genny: Now I switch Marauding Captain to defense mode. Marauding Captain 400 Defense.  Genny: I end my turn. Kaiser: I draw and play Gladiator beast fusion so now I can special summon a fusion type monster that has Gladiator beast in it's name. I just have to give up 1500 life points.  K:1300 Kaiser: Now I fusion summon Gladiator beast Heralinos! Gladiator beast Heralinos 3000 ATK.  kaiser: Now I'll destroy your Gaia and end this duel!!! Genny: you can only attack Marauding Captain when he is on the field. Kaiser: well then attack Marauding Captain Heralinos! (Monster Destroyed). Kaiser: Next turn your mine. Genny: Alright come on Deck don't let me down. Awesome I play the best spell in my arsenal Pot Of greed so now I can draw 2 cards! now I play Hammer Shot to destroyed your Heralinos. Kaiser:oh man no!!! Travis:oh he is in for it now.  Genny: next I'll attack you directly with gaia go!!! K:0000g:200 Genny: Thank god thats over! Now shall we continue? Travis: Genny you have no remorse for the death of our professor? Genny: well I never liked him anyway so why should I? Travis: He was a person. you gotta feel some sadness towards him. Genny: Nope none.  Travis: well I wondered why he dueled us?... Do you think that Sigurdor got to him and thats why he went missing? Kai: thats quite a possibility. Travis: Well Guys lets go. I bet we have so many more battles left it's not even funny.  Meanwhile...  Sigurdur: My final dark Riders and hyper Riders come to me. (a blur of dark light appeared in front of Sigurdor and there his Dark Rider and Hyper Riders bowed in front of him). Sigurdor : my Riders it is time for the final battle it us versus the kids of duel Academy. Dragonove,Death Blossom,,and Imperious it's time to go to war. Pride: um sir what about Joy and I are we gonna battle? Sigurdor: did you expect too. Because I don't need you any more or Joy so now i vanish you.  Pride: What!!! (Sigurdor waved his hand and Joy and Pride and joy struggled to keep there breath but they could not and they turned in to dust). Sigurdor: Now if anyone of you try to disobey me ever again that will happen to you under stand? Hyper riders:Yes Master.  Sigurdor: now Report to your station the duelist will arrive soon and you better be ready for your battle. Hyper Rider: Right master.  (Then the duelist reported to there Stations). Well it looks like the Hyper riders are ready to go in for battle. The question is are the others ready to go into battle for Duel Academy as well. Find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX:Battles At Duel Academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 Nice chapter man, but i would have liked if the Gladiator Beasts would have used their effects you know tagging out and stuff. Sigurdur has a lot of power i can't wait for the final showdown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 good chapter...sort of... Imperius is at it & finally shows himself wonder what comes next... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Fantastic chapter! I so waited for these!Death Blossom is finally in action! Wohoo! Her Unbearable power! Is too strong can the gang defeat him! LETS JUST FIND OUT!!! WOHOOO!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 chapter 24 Room 1: Head games Travis: Alright guys you ready for our next challenge guys? Gang:Yeah we are.  Travis: well lets open this door then.  (The 6 then opened pushed on the door. Inside it was pitch Black inside the room but a small light was lit up inside the room). Travis: Alright guys walk slowly towards that Light and lets hold hands so we can stay together.  (They all grabbed each-others hand and walked towards the light. Then the 6 started to notice that light was not getting any bigger it seemed like they were not getting any closer to the Light).  Genny: Is it just me or are we not moving at all? Ray: Umm... I think either this is the longest room ever or we are not even moving at all. Travis; of course we are moving...aren't we?  Itsuki: we should be unless this is just a head trick. Travis: How could it be a head trick if we... Matter of fact how could it not be a head trick.  Itsuki:So someone got in our head and is messing with our brains?  Travis: If that is true how are they all messing with our head? Kai: ugh! I just want this freaky "Jedi Mind Trick" To end now! Genny: oh no if this is a trick the controller should be able to do anything right? Ray: yeah oh god... We are at his or her's disposal. Oh god what if they choose to have one of us go crazy or... (Then all of the sudden Yukiko,Itsuki,Genny,Ray,and Kai's eyes started to glow and they all turned towards Travis). Travis: Er... guys whats the matter. (The 5 said nothing but they began to walk towards Travis). Travis: Guys Snap out of it whats the matter? (The 5 continued to not talk then they got a hold of Travis from his limbs). Travis: Guys let go. Please Let go!!! (Thinking) Alright calm down Travis. Think Logical. Only I can control my mind and no one else can. Alright I gotta concentrate and get control of my mind. My friends would never try to hurt me intensionally.Now guys LET ME GOOOO! I gotta talk to the person controlling my mind. N (The 5 then let him go). Travis:I gotta talk to the person controlling my mind. HEY COME OUT NOW! YOU ARE NO LONGER CONTROLLING MY MIND SO COME OUT!!! ???: Well aren't you Sharp. Travis: who are you? ???:my name is Death Blossom and I am a Hyper Rider.  Travis: Oh so you are the one who has been in my head. Blossom: Afraid so. So my Master has sent me here so that I could defeat at least one of you and thats what I'm gonna do. I'm gonna defeat you the strongest on the team.  Travis:Well you can expect a fight because It's on Blossom! Blossom: So I bet you think that I should bring us back to the real world so that you can have your friends on your side right? thats a Rhetorical question. In other words you don't have to answer it because I'm in your head so I know your thoughts. I'll make your wish come true so now we will go back to the real world.  (all of the sudden they were with Travis's friends. Travis was on the ground his friends were trying to wake him up. Travis shot up and was staring at Blossom). Genny: oh man Travis what happened man? Travis: she happened. (He pointed at Blossom). Kai: You! Blossom: Alright kid lets go I don't have all day.  Travis: Man I'm exhausted I can't even get up.  Blossom: if you don't stand kiddo you will forfeit the duel and your soul.  Travis: but I can't stand up. it seems so impossible. Kai:I'll duel in your place Travis. Blossom: I don't want to battle you I want to battle Travis! Yukiko: Either you duel him or you don't duel at all.  Blossom: Fine. lets do this.  (They both activated there duel disk). Blossom and Kai: Duel! B:4000Y:4000 Blossom: Alright I'll begin. I play Gemini Elf in attack mode! Gemini Elf 1900 ATK. Blossom: next I'll play a spell known as Spell Absorption. This card gives me 500 life points every time one of us activates a spell card. So now I'm gonna have a bunch of life points. Your move. Kai:Alright I summon The Six Samurai - Irou in attack mode.  The Six Samurai - Irou 1700 ATK. Kai: Next I'll special summon Grandmaster of the Six Samurai from my hand to the field since have a six samurai on the field.  Grandmaster of the Six Samurai 2100 ATK.  Kai: now my Grandmaster will attack your elf. go and get rid of them.  (Monster Destroyed). B:3800 Kai: and thats not all I'll attack you with my Irou now!!! Blossom: ow!!! B:2100.  Blossom: I'll just bring them back up later. Kai: I would love to see you try.  Blossom: Now I draw and play Ebon Magician Curran in attack mode.  Ebon Magician Curran 1200 ATK.  Blossom: Now I play Mage Power. Now my Ebon gains 500 attack for every spell and Trap card on my side of the field. Also I gain 500 life points because of Spell Absorption B:2600. Ebon Magician Curran 1700 ATK. Blossom: Now I play a face-down and then my monster shall get stronger.  Ebon Magician Curran 2200 ATK. Blossom: Now Ebon attack his Irou!!!  Kai: oh man ahh!!! K:3500 Blossom: I now end my turn. lets go samurai. Genny: thats okay Kai you are still winning.  Kai: Well I guess that true. I draw and play The Six Samurai - Kamon in attack mode! The Six Samurai - Kamon 1500 ATK. Kai: Now I play Legendary Ebon Steed and equip it to The Six Samurai - Kamon. This card gives my monster 200 extra attack points. The Six Samurai - Kamon 1700 ATK.  Blossom: I get 500 life points from that spell. B:3100 Kai: now I end my turn.  Blossom: Ha I see you didn't switch your monsters to defense mode. That my cue and my Ebon inflicts 300 points of damage to you for every monster on your side of the field.  Kai:ahh!! K:2900. Blossom: Next I summon White Magician Pikeru in attack mode. White Magician Pikeru 1200 ATK. Blossom: I will now play Premature burial. I give up 800 life points and then I can bring back My Gemini Elf. Well I also gain 500 life points because of spell absorption. B:2300B:2800 Gemini Elf 1900 ATK.White Magician Pikeru 1200 ATK.Ebon Magician Curran 2700 ATK. Blossom:Now I'll attack your Kamon with my Gemini Elf! Kai: Ahh! K:2700 Kai: when my monster equipped with Ebon steed, Ebon Steed is destroyed instead.  The Six Samurai - Kamon 1500 ATK Blossom: Well I will now attack Grandmaster of the Six samurai with Ebon! (Monster destroyed).  K:2100 Blossom: I now end my turn. Kai: Alright I draw. I play Double summon so I now play The Six Samurai - Zanji and The Six Samurai - Nisashi The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1400 ATK.The Six Samurai - Zanji 1800 ATK.The Six Samurai - Kamon 1500 ATK.B:3300 Kai: Now I can play some effects. Zanji attack Ebon.  Blossom: What my monster is clearly stronger. SO what are you doing?  K:1300. (Monsters destroyed). Blossom: Oh no what happened to my monster and why is yours still on the field and where did your Nisashi? Kai: When Zanji attack a monster it will be destroyed by the end of the damage step. Also when a six samurai is destroyed I can destroy a different Six samurai. Next my kamon will destroy your White Magician Pikeru.  (Monster Destroyed).  B:3000. Blossom: I activate Call of the haunted to bring back my Ebon Magician Curran in attack mode.  Ebon Magician Curran 1200 ATK. Kai: I end my turn. Blossom: Alright you now lose 900 life points thanks to Ebon. Kai:ahh! K:400 Blossom: Next I sacrifice my monster to summon Chaos Command Magician Chaos Command Magician 2400 ATK. Blossom: Now Chaos Command Magician attack kamon and end this duel. Kai: Sorry to disappoint but I activate Eliminating the League so now I discard 1 magic card and your monster is destroyed. so now your monster is destroyed Blossom and this duel is over on my next turn.  Blossom:... I end my turn. Kai: I special summon Great Shogun Shien in attack mode since I have 2 six samurai's on the field. Great Shogun Shien 2500 ATK. Kai: Now I'll attack you directly with Great Shogun Shien! B:500 Blossom:ahh!!! Kai: now Zanji attack her and end this!! B:0000K:400 Blossom: you have defeated me in a duel so you may progress to the next room. Please Defeat Sigurdor. He is a very evil person and he will stop at nothing to destroy all of you. I wish you the best luck duelist. (Then She faded into dust soon after the speech). Kai: aw man I Actually feel bad for her.  Travis: Man it's alright. Now can you guys help me up please and lets go to next room. Genny: yeah lets go. IT seems that they have gotten through the 1st challenge but what challenge shall they face in the next room find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battles at duel academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 good chapter there...wonder where you get that Jedi Mind Trick thing from... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Man Two word's you didn't show Alixia's True pwers unllike last time!! Man what a bummer!Death Blossom is the master of Spellcasters! she's really great with! it! and poof she loses all of a sudden! You might atleast the battle more interesting! XD (Cries out loud!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Great chapter man, but i think you should use the monsters effects more in the duels. Anyhoo did you get the written cards i sent you for Sigurdur ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Though i didn't like chapter 4(*sob*)Iam expecting that Prof. Alison "The Dueling Terror" Crowler join the battle alongside the gang...he's deck if you have forgotten was the deck of the creator which the list i sent to you ages ago! ^_^ looking forward to it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Muskrat Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Greatest fan-fic, Skuldor!??? I just don't understand your sig. Wouldn't hurt if it was written like an actual story. http://forums.yugiohetc.com/index.php?showtopic=169978http://forums.yugiohetc.com/index.php?showtopic=169885http://forums.yugiohetc.com/index.php?showtopic=155184 Some fan-fics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 This is not my Fan-Fic i was just advertising it for John, all praise should go to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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